WHOO UPDATE! Oh, I always have mixed feelings about this part of the story...but I liked how you wrote it! =)

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I really like this story, I think its gold. But you really, really need to add detail. Like a lot of detail. the story would be a whole lot better with detail. You are taking things too fast. Slow down. Its like one minute they were in the professors house then two sentences down Rose and Peter were married. Slow down and add mucho detail.
Develope the characters relationsips more. Yea, you get the vibe of how they all feel about each other, but the vibe is boring. please update soon

this is really good i mean i just thought u were doing the first film but its good ure doing this and i love the way its like the love triangle idea

Finally!I'd been waiting soo long for the next chapter!I can't wait till the next!Oh please do let Edmund & Rose be together,it seems..akward with Peter & Rose together.

EdmundXRose= Redmund
PeterXRose=Pose(eek!)

That was because I was bored.LOL.

great chapter. its so sad though.

OMG I'm so happy you updated!
Peter's being a jerk! GR! I wanna hit him in the head with something! XD

update soon!

You should continue. I like it very much. :D

neat
Aims5;)

that was pretty. but i found the story too..fast-paced. maybe you should slow it down a bit. yeah and pls do something nice for edmund, coz u kinda made me pity him here. but aside from those, it was really beautiful. = ). you did a great job.

Love it! As always!

I like how you get the personality's of everyone right, especially Peter's. But personally, I think it's going along a little fast. My only advice is to slow it down a bit, other than that it's really good.

This story has me interested. It isn't finished, is it? I have to say, although I feel bad for Edmund, I think it would be way to mean to poor Peter if she were to switch her love from him to Ed. I dunno. I have a soft spot for Peter, especially with all of the stories where a girl leaves him for Ed. I do feel bad for Ed though, and I can't decide what should happen to make me happy! D: Great story so far though! Update soon!!

Aw...I was practically in tears! And that's a good thing, cause I love this story! And no one was awake to make fun of me for being excited that you updated! Yay! =)