I've had this fanfic bookmarked for so long. And I keep checking, every-other-day, if you update. Your idea for this FF is amazing! I wish you'd come back and post. ):

I love this story and Edward is so adorable around Bella. *Sigh* But this is my guess, I think Bella is dying or maybe already dead.

OH. MY. GOSH! For cereal! I haven't read something this wonderfully written by such a young (or so you say) writer! I'm blown away by how captivating the story line is and how well written it is! Props for that one! I just glanced at the last time you updated and was a tad bit disappointed, yet hope is shining through...girl...or maybe guy, I'm guessing girl...you'd better update soon! I don't care if the chapter is long or short, as long as it's not an author's note, I'll be a happy camper! So, please update soon, you're an outstanding writer! Keep it up!

ps...would you be interested in helping me with a multi author story? I adore your style and think you'd be a great addition to the mix of writing styles :D

I love it. <3
I think the meeting should be happy and easy with a little confusion. (:
Anyways, I hope that you update soon. (:

I love it! update soon!

Haha, this story is like really good, and well written. I can't wait for it to be updated! (: I absolutly LOVE this story.

Cool! I really like this story! How longs it gonna be? Update soon!

Hurry next chapter i need to no wat happens rite now I am litterally shaking i want 2 no wen they c each other agan. YOU AND THIS STORII R AWESOME!
KEEP WRITING KEEP SMILING AND KEEP PARTYING!

HAPPY easy she should be pinning over him as well and when they reunite it she should be all finally! thats what i think.

O MY GOD! i LOVE ur story!! plz update n fast! thanx! i bet ur the only person 2 write a story with this idea!! GREAT JOB!:)

I wouldn't want there to be another guy per se, but maybe just some confusion and firm words. Hope that helps.

Great story, can't wait to read more :)

Love this story. And the reunion should have bella resist- because that is what her character seems to be like- and after a bit she finally relents and everyones happy

Ugh I wrote a great review but there was a problem with my internet when i pressed submit so it didn't go through. Gay. Lets see if I can remember it. Ok well lets start off by saying that it is just rude how great a writer you are. Seriously it's ridiculous. It makes me feel totally worthless. Not to meantion the fact that your four years younger than me. You have to finish this story. I don't know if you already decided on on continuing it or not, but even if you did i'm just giving you more motivation to finish it. I'm kinda undecided on whether their reunion should be happy/easy or some other way because I'm a sucker for happy endings, they make my day. But then again angst makes me pretty damn giddy too. So as long as they end up together do with the story what you wish.

o...m...g! i need to know what happens plz update soon! i need to know if edward finds her! plz update update update...!:)

LMAO!!
I loved it!
really funny!!
i like how they all expected something completly different!!
really awesome can't wait for more!!
oh and I love We the KIngs and All again for you!!
=D