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Roselna
2009-10-09 . chapter 1
Dang it, Tanta, will you ever update!? And...YAY! ME IZ ON UR FRIEND LIST! sorry, i haves dr.pepper. serious! mom left some in the refrigerator...and she didn't touch...i think i knowz why...BUT WHO CARES?! :D Oh, and iz also very happy u still didn't get the dreaded story up! Iz overdues by almost a week! YAYZ!
Roselna
2009-08-22 . chapter 7
GAH! Will it ever get through your thick head that I DON'T LIKE THE NAME ROSIE? I've had to have told you that a million times. And will you hurry up and update? I'm tired of no new chapters and you left it at a CLIFFHANGER. You're supposed to update sooner if you do one of those. SO HURRY UP! And sorry if I seem kinda mean.
Hazelthorn
2009-08-10 . chapter 7
write. more. now
Violaunte
2009-08-04 . chapter 6
wa
meanie butt
poop head meanie butt


I was Hazel's closest sister, due to our escaping together.

i'm so offended :(
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Hazelthorn
2009-08-03 . chapter 6
ok...
the were-rabbit
Roselna
2009-07-31 . chapter 5
Okay, a little embarrassing on my part, but otherwise I love it. Update soon, okay?
Roselna
2009-07-31 . chapter 2
Common sense- very important when you live in the Jellicle Junkyard.
I am a writer. Fear me.
2009-07-27 . chapter 5
The love needs to develop... not be too soon. Mistoffelees needs to slowly realize that he loves Tantamiri, not just a quick thing. It makes readers more interested. And when you do love somebody, I believe, the "lover" says the "lovee"'s name completely, like in Pride and Prejudice; Mr. Darcy always calls her Elizabeth, while everybody else calls her Lizzy. It's a sign of respect, you know. He would have called Vicky, Victoria, and Tanta, Tantamiri. Also like in that 70's show, the girl calls him "Micheal" instead of Kelso, like everybody else. Then again, she's snooty, so it doens't matter. Good job, other than those trivial things :D
Hazelthorn
2009-07-27 . chapter 5
this is so funny
Now Hazel's a theief.
Whoop-Dee.
A Proud Son of Macavity
2009-07-26 . chapter 4
I'm sorry
you both seem to enjoy writing, but neither of you are any good at it
Hazelthorn
2009-07-20 . chapter 4
mungo
teazer
YAYHAZEL!
nekofey69
2009-07-19 . chapter 4
ooh, they might be in trouble soon?
no spoil this time though please :3
and one moe thing...YAY MISTO!
ps-i suck at criquite...especially because if it's really bad i just stop reading
Violaunte
2009-07-18 . chapter 4
rock awn! hehehe your sisters are popsicles
Aquavera
2009-07-15 . chapter 3
When do I come in? Do u not like me or something? You... you... you... SPOON!
Violaunte
2009-07-05 . chapter 3
MORE!\I WANTSES MORE!
I ALSO WANT MUNGO AND TEAZER TO ENTER!
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