Aww, that was really sweet.

I haven't read the "Motion of the Ocean" (hey, that rhymes!) but I like how Kit decides to quote it and the use of Shakspeare is different, I don't think I've seen Shakespeare integrated (in any of the fan fics I've read) and done smoothly at that.

Nice job!

-Don "QuixoticQuest"

I like this, it's a deeper, more pensive kind of one-shot, and I think you pulled it off very well. Nita's fears were realistic, and I loved the way Kit helped her on her way to getting over them. =] I also think it's really interesting how she could no longer write her name in the Speech - I've never seen a fic that did that before, and I think it's a really interesting concept. I like the way you handled it.

Your writing was smooth, clear, very much like a calm ocean, if I do say so. haha. That only added to the overall thoughtful tone of this story. Amazing job. =] xx

Awesome new chapter. I like how you put realistic situations that Nita would face later on in her life. It just seems like those of things would happen to her especially because of all the weird things I've noticed in the YW books.