 Jatschl 2009-08-21 . chapter 1This is a great story, I really enjoyed reading it. I liked the climax (tiny spark of hope, bonfire, raging inferno, etc) and how you used the tantra in Lois thoughts. I could really identify with Lois figuring out Clark's secret. Both Lois and Clark were in character, you described them very well. Loved the end. |