This is another great chapter, and I like how you've handled the whole "crush" issue. I also like the idea of Marty actually being Clint Eastwood in 1955!

Looking forward to reading more. :)

I like this story so far, and I love this line "human food waste disposal" hahaha. Very clever. Keep up the good work!

This is another great chapter. I'm trying hard to imagine Michael J Fox with messy brown brown and wild slate-blue eyes. I suppose that would be kind of a scary sight, and hinder Marty's social life.

Well, I can't hardly wait for Chapter Four. I like what I've read, so far.

This is another great chapter. I wonder what's going to happen, next. Since this version of Marty is a big nerd, I'm not sure if Lorraine would fall for him. Well, I'm excited to see what happens next.

Off to read the next chapter. :)

This is a great chapter! Smart Marty sounds a lot like Doc of The Animated Series. I love some of the clever alternate terms that you've used, especially this one: "descendants one generation removed of a male and female human who are engaging in an illegitimate relationship".

Well, I'm off to read some more. This is very fascinating. :)

I think you uploaded the wrong document. This looks like Chapter Three of Travelling Through Dimensions.