|Reviews for One Down|
| ComicalEpiphanies 8/23/10 . chapter 1
Great emotional effect. I was really impressed just how ashamed I felt for him.
| Motherofthehorde 2/6/10 . chapter 1
Thanks for writing. I'm impressed with the short. Hope you write some more.
| jquist 6/29/09 . chapter 1
Pretty good thought piece. I enjoyed how you had Jake flashback to what the brother had said about his sister being captured and having a chance at a different path.
I think you have promise!