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Sweet story! :)

HI GENERAL GIRL!

I Always like stories where the first line {summary or the first-line-of-the-story.] draws me in & this story was definately one of them. In this fic,BOTH the FIRST & the LAST LINE WAS POWERFUL & IMPACTFUL.

First i thought it was one-of-those-run-of-the-mills-sasuke-returns-to-ko naha-stories BUT it was not & i discovered a wonderful gem.

You know it was a really great story & definately one of my ALL-TIME-FAVORITES.

You are really a great author...

one-of-your-loyal-readers...

cherry-seven

HI GENERAL GIRL!

I Always like stories where the first line {summary or the first-line-of-the-story.] draws me in & this story was definately one of them. In this fic,BOTH the FIRST & the LAST LINE WAS POWERFUL & IMPACTFUL.

First i thought it was one-of-those-run-of-the-mills-sasuke-returns-to-ko naha-stories BUT it was not & i discovered a wonderful gem.

You know it was a really great story & definately one of my ALL-TIME-FAVORITES.

You are really a great author...

one-of-your-loyal-readers...

cherry-seven

I love that line that Sasuke says, ""Because for you I'll prove myself twice." It's so romantic! .

please update faster,,

This is beautifully written; great job on evoking so much emotion form this fic! :3

I think this ended on the perfect note. I liked watching Sakura's journey as she waited for Sasuke, whether she realized that was what she was doing or not. )

I thought you did a wonderful job, as always!

lol i dont really get the title and last paragraph but ovverall the story had a great meaning!

Lovely story. I liked the idea of minimal dialog with maximum effect. Congratulations for successfully harnessing the art of subtlety in this piece. By turning a very cliched scenario into a memorable piece that stands out in the sea of "Sasuke returns to Konoha" stories, I give you a standing ovation. Plus, the characters are not OOC so another round of applause for you.

Write more!

I think that was one of the best lines ever. And Coldplay inspired you? I love that song.

Nice story.

"She wondered if his scent was on her too, and if it was going to be a mark, a brand that she’d never be able to scrub off.

The idea pleased her so much..."

Beautiful.

That was a really sweet story!

This was rather pretty and the lack of dialogue only made it prettier - usually people drown their stories in dialogue...(I do it at times too).

I liked this a lot. I got so absorbed to it, and that usually doesn't happen since I get distracted easily.

Anyway, amazing job, and the inspirational quote, both, "Because for you I'll prove myself twice" and "For you I'll bleed myself dry" are rather powerful and it made the story prettier.

Great job!

So freaking beautiful