I LOVE!
:D

great!
nice!
like it!

Kawaii!
You did a very nice job!
Hope you'll make more one-shots!

this is so cute!
i love it!

dat was a super cute story! i love the names of their children! very sweet! (no pun intended!) i didn't kno dat Natsume's name meant date in japanese good you mentioned it. .^^

ja ne

LOL
that was so funny
haha
:D

LMAO!! THIS WAS FRIGGIN HILARIOUS XD!

Lol! Another funny and cute story. I like the idea of not making GA a boarding school and how Zakuro scared his sister

LOL that was sweet.

Wait... did YOU brush your teeth?

and btw, my nicknames Mumu, nice to see it being used XD, thanks for putting this upo it's good!

Lov Mumu~ X

haha that's funny and cute xD

aww.. that was so sweet! =3 especially the names of NxM's kids.. that was a great one-shot! please continue writing more of your wonderful stories! thank you!