I loved this piece It was amazingly written. Excellent job.

So cruel! I'm shocked at you! Appauled!

Great story though! Damn it!

Wow - what an intense little story. It definitely felt like my heart was racing all the way to the end.

I've read a bunch of stories where the Cullen powers are often obnoxious or obtrusive, but few where the the madness they could actually cause looms so heavily. It's as though you've channeled the dark lust that others employ for the Alice/Bella relationship and focused it elsewhere.

Nicely done.

This is really good, and i would love to see this turn into a longer story, i would really like to see what Edward was going to do.

Gah this ended with the mother of all cliff hangers! Still, it was great and I enjoyed it!

A great story. Very well written.

OMG That was so good. I got a little confused between the first bedroom scene and the first scene where she was trying to block her thoughts from Edward. I understood after though. It was cute though.I was hoping that she, Alice, would just say that she already told Bella and she gave her the necklace to remember her by... But I guess that was just wishful thinking. :)

i like it i really hope you post more!

Your first posted Bellice fic! Wowzers the number of reviews you got for just this one...and after reading it, I know why.

The ending leaves so much to the imagination, LOVE IT :P

um, wait, is that it?

you're kidding me. ;

No.

No way.

You've got to be kidding me.

You're writing is amazing unlike other Bellice fics...

And it ends here?

Please update, even though it's old.

You'd be doing us all a huge favor.

I really really liked this. It was written very good and for your first Twilight fic I think you wrote the characters very well. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens.

Fucking AWESOME!

great story! wat happens next? lol

that just happened! you ended it! please please please write more of this! it was awesome!