great story! wat happens next? lol

that just happened! you ended it! please please please write more of this! it was awesome!

oh is there a sequel? there should be...

So...it's me again. Have you seriously thought about continuing this story? Even...just...thought..about it?

Hi i love you fick but what happen with Alice? Poor Bella too it was very sad.

so funny

you shoulddefo write some more of this x

hi XD ah please update I wanna see the next chapter so badly!! lol screw edward..he is a possessive overprotective selfish person...and Alice is..Alice =P don't need to say anything else..lol well see you! bye bye.

plz continue i luv this stry!

i loved it it was really good :)

more please!

I like the feeling of the story -- the darkness throughout it all is intoxicating. Your prose is exceptional :D which is really something these days, to find something so enjoyable to read.

I thought it was really cute how she kept walking into things, you conveyed the tension really well.

It is true that the voices of the characters aren't perfect, but it seems more because of the genre like you said. Either way, practice makes perfect. XD

The only thing I felt a little put off by was the other Cullens' reactions. I always figured them to be really, really understanding of one another, so in that aspect, I was a little disappointed by the ending, although it definitely had an edge. Not because it was bad, but because it wasn't happy. But I like angst too, and you do write it well.

One of the best (if not the best) Bella/Alice stories I have ever read! it had so much I want more! haha Love to see that fight -grin-
Great job =D

Wow. Love it.
I like how Alice was so tortured by it, having to keep it from her family and stuff. Aws, and then the goodbye, so sad. Cool cliffhanger. Awsome story =D

uh oh. i feel bad for alice but its not like she can help herself. i can't believe their not mad at bella. she took part in it too.

i luved it