I don't know if you've ever seen One Tree Hill or not because you didn't really seem to base this story off of anything, but for future reference you spell it Peyton not Peaton. This story was really kinda ** up at first I thought it was supposed to have Humor instead of Angst but this story really just didn't have either or Friendship. You might want to take this off, no offense but it makes absolutely no sense...

I wasn't sure whether or not I was going to review this story. Then I visited your page and read a few of your other stories. The greatest author that ever lived? Hardly. But I do respect your strange (deranged?) sense of humor. Just work on the grammar.

please i read many things but this was actually not good

there is no sense behind this
and it is with wrong name spellings and grammatical errors

just don't do this again
thanks

wtf?
I have no idea what I just read.
You wrote this while drunk or something?
:s