Personally I loved it and look forward to more chapters. I especially love how Seishiro stayed in character still. I probably would have felt as confused as Subaru and it makes me laugh how he's still shy about saying what he wants to say.

Great job! I look forward to seeing this story and the pairing grown. = ]

Beh, che carina... ^-^ Molto tenera (per quanto possa esserlo una fic con quei due per protagonisti xD)...

I like it.

I like this; it's ironic that you had Seishirou realize the importance in the beating of a heart, when that's where he aims to kill.

I personally think that the great number in breaks ["..."] when Subaru was speaking while dying- and afterward- was a bit overdone. While reading it in my head, it sounded a little awkward.

But other than that, great job in writing and idea!

Delightful! I completely adore it. Seishiro learning to appreciate the sound of Subaru's beating heart... Fantastic work, as always.

This is simply wonderful. All it took for Seishirou to realize how much Subaru means to him is Subaru's near deah experience! I love the way Seishirou keeps referring to Subaru's heartbeat, about how nice it sounds. It's Seishirou's way of reassuring himself that Subaru's alive. This is incredibly well done!