Awesome story! :D
You know, I've ALWAYS asked myself WHAT could have caused that ancient grudge. So glad someone wrote a fanfic on the origins! :)

Hi, remember me?! I loved it, I had to read R+J at school...the rivalry between the two was very unexplained...

Did you know that Quintus/Quintinus was the roman name for the fifth month of their calendar year?

Keep writing, and remember to read my story (if my laptop behaves itself...)

best wishes!

Leopardstorm!

Not bad. The core conflict between Sven and Quintus worked pretty well, though I thought that Evanus's death reminded me much more of Mercutio's than Tybalt's.

The names were kind of weird, though. Sven? Really? And a Mademoiselle in what seems to be Byzantine times?

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