 May Eve 2009-12-25 . chapter 1-laughing hysterically- Brilliant! ^^ |
 Rena the pirate jedi wizard 2009-12-22 . chapter 1Well, that was cool. Yes, they most likely did want it far too much. So could they still use their old abilities? |
 AddictedToReading 2009-12-21 . chapter 1 This is really good, I love this style of one-shot. But there's one thing I didn't get, what did you mean when you said "It was an accident of culture that had them both calling each other by their personal names"? |
 Lady Red 88 2009-12-18 . chapter 1Humph, I think Sasuke's fine. He's a hard guy to write anyway. I noticed you seem to like dabbling in HP/Naruto crossovers although you've only ever done oneshots. (Don't quote me there though. I haven't been through all your stories yet.) Anyway, I was thinking it'd be nice to see a multi-chaptered crossover from you. You write extremely well and there simply aren't enough of them out there.
Anyway, I'm not one to dictate so it's entirely up to you but I promise I'd be you're biggest fan and that's saying something because I don't like fan-girling and refrain from doing it. Anyway, the choice is up to you. Personally I'd like perhaps an expanded version of this fic. I found it highly entertaining and think there is a lot of material in there to be expanded upon. Whatever happens, good luck with it. ^_^ |
 Nostalgic Beauty 2009-11-25 . chapter 1Wow, I never saw the similarity before, but now that you point it out, it's pretty obvious. They both even lost their whole families! But, Harry never knew his, and Sasuke watched his die.
Still, very clever one-shot. |
 the kraken is my pet 2009-09-12 . chapter 1i laughed my head off while reading this!
absolutely brilliant. it had just enough informtion to not be confusing and short enough to leave an impring in the mind.
amazing kepp up the good work! |
 Shadow of Flame 2009-08-22 . chapter 1So essentially Harry and Sasuke gave the other magic/chakra. Cool. Very well written, good job. |
 Faenea 2009-08-16 . chapter 1Good story. Probably one of the best Harry PotterxNaruto cross-overs I have read. |
 ttd 2009-08-01 . chapter 1A very satisfying 'what if' one-shot.
Many thanks,
Tom |
 Violet Shadows 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Amusing as a one shot though, it probably would have been better if you elaborated more on the time in between their meeting and the final showdown. Maybe a short chapter fic. |
 goddessa39 2009-07-27 . chapter 1I don't know much about Naruto but i liked this. |
 Firehedgehog 2009-07-26 . chapter 1interesting |
 Thrae Elddim 2009-07-23 . chapter 1Very interesting concept... Never come across it before, either on the interwebs or in my own mind! Good work on it! |
 JuMiKu 2009-07-20 . chapter 1*laugh* Well, those two sure got along well. That was one refreshing cross-dimensional interaction; quite different. |
 mione the kneazle 2009-07-18 . chapter 1Bwahahahaha! How apt for these two characters! I can so see this happening. I definitely enjoyed the story. |