beautifully written!

Heartbreaking for Edward. Bella likes Jasper. Just when Edward realizes he has feelings for her. He needs to stay around her and maybe she'll change her mind from Jasper to him.

Well. At least it wasn't Jacob :)

Loved the story, thank you

Poor Edward! I can feel his pain! He should have made a stand. Or touched Jasper - firmly and HARD - in the face!

Simple but powerful. I absolutely loved it.

I liked the character development and was surprised on the introduction of Jasper. I want to know more..

so heartwrenching...

Aww! That was really good!

ohh dundun nice one shot you got my vote

OUCH. Yeah. THAT SMARTS. Maybe I need a rubbing alcohol chaser to go with that? Very well written...should be a good contest, I really like the specs you have for it, I'm sure it will be interesting to say the least! - I'm looking forward to reading the entries. Good luck!

I loved it.

It was heartbreaking and aroused a feeling of helplessness, I mean, what can he possibly do?

Very simple, but sweet and touching. No puns intended there. I like how much you were able to say with just a few words...I've always had the problem of taking 20 words to say what could be said in 10.

Haha, and Jasper makes an apperance! Haha, of course. I should've known... I absolutely loved it! Fabulous! Love the podcast

aw

this is realy sweet!

Poor Edward

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