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Reviews for: First Kiss On The Cross
Summer Jonium 3/5/12 . chapter 1
This was so much fun to read. Your a great writer! XD You just have to love Cross sometimes and what he finds humorous and how he goes about things. I was just thinking when Lavi was making sure Lenalee was ok 'YAY! LAVI X LENALEE!' Although I'm not a very big fan of those two they can be cute from time to time. I was also thinking 'GO! ALLEN!' when he was yelling at Cross. XD Great story! Keep writing!
immortalxdesign 2/11/11 . chapter 1
Pffft

I love this

x'D Go cross
go-getter-girl22 1/2/11 . chapter 1
Nice one shot! lol and I had the same thoughts after that episode where the guys walk in on what appears to be Cross taking advantage of Lenalee XD lol and I have to admit that Cross is kind of hot in a BAMF womanizer sort of way haha

And I liked how Cross mentioned to Lenalee about the apparent crushes Allen and Lavi have on her. It made my LaviLena fangirl happy inside lol _ (even though that I know it probably won't ever happen in the manga and Allen/Lenalee is more likely to come about *sigh*)

Okay now I'm rambling 0_o

Anyways great one-shot! :)
PeachKeen13 11/21/10 . chapter 1
I love it! Very funny!
rain-dancer 7/8/10 . chapter 1
OMG! too adorable! I remember when they walked in on her and cross (not doing anything of course ;). It was hilarious!
Shadow1005 4/10/10 . chapter 1
Now we know what happens to Cross! Lavi and allen ACCIDENTELY Killed him :3
fabulosfan 8/15/09 . chapter 1
EPIC! I just saw that and came to check to see if any stories were written and WOOLAH! Ninjas story! (ninja is a compliment :D)
Paradoxismminant 7/24/09 . chapter 1
More lol worthy sappiness
veve 7/16/09 . chapter 1
Cross is love 3
Jachson5 6/29/09 . chapter 1
KOL
Por Favor9 6/29/09 . chapter 1
LOL pretty funny
Palistus 6/29/09 . chapter 1
Lol I feel sorry for Lenalee
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