Absolutely brilliant prose. The descriptive imagery is fantastic, touching, and poignant. Yui's inner monologue is beautifully done. Perhaps a little over-poetic for her character, but I can't say I'm not guilty of the same. Wonderful story. I was deeply touched by the symbolism of the clock and the new moon in refence to Yui's struggles. You show enormous talent and excellent analytical ability when it comes to comprehending and writing about the inner thoughts of the characters. Again, wonderful work. _ I'd love to see more from you.

Lovely. It had that sort of rambling semi-insanity air to it, and that's really hard to pull off without overdoing it. Yui is too often portrayed as either the bitch of the series or the sob story of the series, and this was a little of both, but not too much of either. She's a great character if she's portrayed right, and this was perfect.