i wandered about what effects the Yamanaka jutsu would have on narutos mindscape

hes got experince fighting in his head, so he could hold her off right? not to mention how kuubi would react. (or what side of the cage she would show up on)

all in all ripping your soul out and throwing it at your foes is NEVER a good idea, even less so against somone like naruto

even without kuubi or his kuubifilled past naruto would still be the same "never give up" guy he his now?

mabey so...

oh like sasuke didnt angst enough allready.


like the rest of this story though... good idea here.

Hojeez. That was a great ending, and hardly one I saw coming. ^^ It was perfect because it was unexpected, but entirely logical. Kudos to you, if I could rate this work, I'd give it a ten. Great, fanfiction.

This chapter was absolutely inspiring! I wish so much that I was as creative as you. I hope that one day I can write something a airtight, and solid as this. I feel like you hit every point no one ever considered. I never liked Hinata until she got up the balls to tell Naruto she loved him. If she was anything like she is in your story I'd be in love with her. I feel like you completed the incomplete character that is Hinata. Beautiful, simple beautiful.

LMAO. I was trying really hard to wait until the end of the story to leave a review, but this was just too funny! Ino's tail has been my favorite so far. <33

I spoke to you in DA about your sketch dump of a bunch of OCs of yours, and an image of Sasuke in Kyuubi form. You sent me here, and I'm not sure if you remember me. Not that important, but I'm ~civillyobscene from DA. I think you should draw this last scene out sometime for me. XD Or maybe just draw Ino with the whiskers, or as Kyuubi. It's too adorable.

Anywho, I'm very much in love with this story, and I'd like you to know that I think it's beautifully written. You're a great writer, and I plan to check out some other fanfictions of yours. <3 Keep up the good work here, and keep drawing. I hope to see something new from you on DA. ^^

I'm going to finish reading now. lol

Hey-o. I'm the poor soul who's ended up organising the "Viridian Dreams Forum Recommends" community (We're at the forum of the guy who writes Team 8).
You may have noticed you're in. We have a system where someone nominates a fic and if two people second it it's in.
Conversation went like this:

N:Alternate Hosting from the fav story list... this story should be added...
R:I second alternate hosting.
Q:I'll third that.
D:I'd fourth it but that would be kind of silly.
De:I´m fifthing it, knowing it to be quite silly.
P: Sixthed. 'Nuff said, ;)
S(me): I get the strangest feeling I should be reading that fic
Ph: You should!

Congrats, we've never had a story seconded by so many members so fast lol. Feel good about yourself :P
w. viridiandreams .net /forum/ viewtopic. php? f=7& t=1031 &start =100
if you want to see it yourself. (take out the spaces)

Ino's was my favourite :D

Good. Very good. Shikamaru's was weak, but the rest were great and 7 was _fantastic_! Thanks, I really enjoued it. Also, 8 was super, thanks to the deep thought behind it. Really, in that case, I think Hinata had a chance to fix it there more than anyone...

*goes off to ponder this*

I know that you had to only do the rookie nine to fit in with the whole nine tails thing. But something popped into my head. What if Rock Lee got the Kyuubi? I can see him bench pressing the Hokage tower if not the monument.

I can see Itachi not being able to go through with it. I can also see Itachi bring so guilt stricken that he wouldn't even put up an Illusion of a fight.

Those bastards who hurt her boys? I take it she has romantic feelings for both of them?

I liked this. It was refreshing to read. Not too long, but not too short. I think I would have liked to see more of the one with Ino... the scene with Gaara was funny, hahaha. A bit more and I would have thought they were asking for Ino's hand in marriage.

...Awesome twist. I still love this fic...

...now I'm a Gaara/Ino shipper. Thanks to this chapter. Seriously though, this fic is REALLY interesting. I love it...

Wow... I was reluctant to read this, but it is actually very deep. It shows all of the possible reactions of being ostracized for a reason that you can't control.

Of course, you might just be writing this for the heck of it, and I'm just looking too deep.