I like this in a kinda weird way. Clever idea though, :)

Oh...sh*t.

Poor kid...(And everyone else.)

*stares*

a lot of interesting ways of how the galaxy could've been doomed. very well done.

OMG! Now, that was greatness! I wrote a story with the same kind of logic for DBZ... just change one thing, and then watch everything else happen as it logically would. Kind of makes you think twice about wishing you could change the past.

I think you should have carryed this story further.

How would the Dark Lord lure Luke out of hideing? Now that his friends and sister are gone.

Who has he left to turn to?

I know it's an old story but it's new to me. It's a good 'what if' story if ever i have read one.

You hate Luke, don't you.

Yikes! Dude! You really add some reality to Star Wars. (complament? I don't know) You really want us to realize how serious Star Wars can be!

That was very cool how you made them die! I liked Yavin IV the best. It's completely random. Try to make some for the Prequel Trilogy too. ;)

wow. You really like to kill off Luke )I don't think he survived any of these. But it's an interesting way to point out how lucky Luke, Leia, and Han were that they weren't expendable characters.

Looks more to me like you're enjoying killing off all the characters on the Light Side and finding a new way to do it each time. If there's any more, can you just get Luke injured instead of killed? It's gotten monotonous.

Heh...I like these...and yes, I do have something against the Farmboy. So there (and I notice you never killed Wedge! Yay!).

i had some hope tht you wouldn't kill Luke in this one. Do you hate lukes's ccharacter or just like to torture fans like me. it's good, though, it would be ironic to be this great lucky hero and then die on a miss landing. It would have been beeter if you had just really really hurt him.

Wouldn't the storm trooper draft Luke istead of killing him? They have drafted other young fit boys to jion the Empire. Even some women, I think. Luke probably wouldn't have been killed. Owen's reaction was realistic though.

I liked your description of what happened to Vader after Luke's death.