I love it Rhani! You are so good at writing. Keep up the good work!

YAY. more!! each chapter just gets better. thankies keep up the good work. xx

Hey there,

I think I reviewed chapter four but incase I didn't here's a review for you. Chapter four was more than interesting, I've always found it surprising with writers who write the cabal as the threat that they never go after Magnus specifically so it's nice to read your story where she's the victim for once. David Kent is also a nice addition, I can't wait to see what you do with him.

As for this chapter or chapter five I like the interaction between Henry & Nikola, it's clear they get on each other's nerves but you wrote it just so it was enough to be annoying and not hateful. I am interested in the boom about blowing things up, not a huge Henry fan but I do hope you didn't kill him.

Melissa

NXXT please? x

it took some time... but you came back, and for that I'm glad! really enjoynig your story!! keep up the good work! :)

great! keep it going, like it very much :):)

This story's awesome! i love how Ashley's aware, but has no control. It'd be interesting to see Helen find her like this. Can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work!

thankies for answering my last comment. Your a really good writer keep up the good work! xx

love you're story!! please don't stop!! :):):)

Hehe, Nikola and John... sparks are gonna fly! Keep it up :D

a very nice read, keep it up :)

please update soon. i want to know this mysterious character from will's past. keep up the good work x

Its all looking great! Some pretty good ideas in there about what they did to Ashley and where she could have ended up :) only things i can see thats wrong is that its Nikola not Nicholae and i think its Cabal too. Sorry im a bit picky on spellings ^^;