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dr-fan/mai-lover
2009-08-27 . chapter 2
bervo i reammer something-inporit joss-dad-is-pro-just-like-sari,s-dad wood-be-aswome if ron&kp-giteing-the-exo=sauits-used-terasnfomers-the-miove-caertoon&rebaith&the-retun-of-onpmiss-peime
Matri
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
Omni Consumer Products, Cyberdyne Systems Corporation, N-Tek Sports, Sumdac Industries?

All you're missing are the Stark Industries weapons & guidance systems and electronics from Wayne Electronics.
pachysam
2009-08-18 . chapter 2
I can't wait for the meeting with Sari.
Here are some quotes you might like:

Sari: I am Sari.
Joss: You're a robot.
Sari: Part-robot from Cybertron. Cybertronians can transform into any kind of vehicle or animal.

Sari: I'll help you, or lose my spark in the attempt.
Joss: Really?
Sari: Yes. It's the Autobot-way. Freedom is the right of all sentient beings.

Sari: Sari, transform!

Here are Sari's weapons:

1. Twin hand-blasters.

2. twin arm-blades that can slice through metal.

3. A war-hammer.

4. Skills at martial arts and enough superhuman-strength to smash stone and no doubt match Megatron.

5. A grappling hook
EagleGamer15
2009-07-09 . chapter 2
lol, younger siblings always have a knack for making guests awkward without realizing.

Something tells me the lack of depth perception in dual-wielding mode will cause Joss some trouble in the future though. Despite how cool it is.
EagleGamer15
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
Wait, Wha?
So, this is Kim Possible fused with Transformers, AND the Terminator?!
Oh man, this is going to be so sweet! Can't wait to read on!
dr-fan/mai-lover
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
bervo ugh what-dispoting-orgain-joss-to-have sari,s-orgin-hhm this remainds-me-tfa-epsd-haunman-eaorror-whaer-sari-bacme-a-hero
dr-fan/mai-lover
2009-07-07 . chapter 2
bervo kp,s-joss-is-techno-orgaic-like-sari-i-woder-if-tfa-atuobots-heple-out-joss-so-whan-aer-joss-meets-sari
why-do-baebot-waith-joss,s-dad
AngelForm
2009-07-07 . chapter 2
Style is good, plot is fairly standard so far but well implemented.

Not sure about the rope, it seems to be an odd choice for something designed with a “combat mode” but we shall see.
Love Robin
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Always a pleasure helping you with stories!

I look forward to where this is going.
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