 dr-fan/mai-lover 2009-08-27 . chapter 2 bervo i reammer something-inporit joss-dad-is-pro-just-like-sari,s-dad wood-be-aswome if ron&kp-giteing-the-exo=sauits-used-terasnfomers-the-miove-caertoon&rebaith&the-retun-of-onpmiss-peime |
 Matri 2009-08-21 . chapter 1Omni Consumer Products, Cyberdyne Systems Corporation, N-Tek Sports, Sumdac Industries?
All you're missing are the Stark Industries weapons & guidance systems and electronics from Wayne Electronics. |
 pachysam 2009-08-18 . chapter 2 I can't wait for the meeting with Sari.
Here are some quotes you might like:
Sari: I am Sari.
Joss: You're a robot.
Sari: Part-robot from Cybertron. Cybertronians can transform into any kind of vehicle or animal.
Sari: I'll help you, or lose my spark in the attempt.
Joss: Really?
Sari: Yes. It's the Autobot-way. Freedom is the right of all sentient beings.
Sari: Sari, transform!
Here are Sari's weapons:
1. Twin hand-blasters.
2. twin arm-blades that can slice through metal.
3. A war-hammer.
4. Skills at martial arts and enough superhuman-strength to smash stone and no doubt match Megatron.
5. A grappling hook |
 EagleGamer15 2009-07-09 . chapter 2lol, younger siblings always have a knack for making guests awkward without realizing.
Something tells me the lack of depth perception in dual-wielding mode will cause Joss some trouble in the future though. Despite how cool it is. |
 EagleGamer15 2009-07-08 . chapter 1Wait, Wha?
So, this is Kim Possible fused with Transformers, AND the Terminator?!
Oh man, this is going to be so sweet! Can't wait to read on! |
 dr-fan/mai-lover 2009-07-07 . chapter 1 bervo ugh what-dispoting-orgain-joss-to-have sari,s-orgin-hhm this remainds-me-tfa-epsd-haunman-eaorror-whaer-sari-bacme-a-hero |
 dr-fan/mai-lover 2009-07-07 . chapter 2 bervo kp,s-joss-is-techno-orgaic-like-sari-i-woder-if-tfa-atuobots-heple-out-joss-so-whan-aer-joss-meets-sari
why-do-baebot-waith-joss,s-dad |
 AngelForm 2009-07-07 . chapter 2Style is good, plot is fairly standard so far but well implemented.
Not sure about the rope, it seems to be an odd choice for something designed with a “combat mode” but we shall see. |
 Love Robin 2009-06-29 . chapter 1Always a pleasure helping you with stories!
I look forward to where this is going. |