I really enjoyed this. It never occured to me- but was perfectly locical- that the three were probably childhood friends, especially since Giacomo was probably an extremely lonely child, kept apart for experimental purposes.

I love how you write their friendship, and each of the as individuals. I urge you to write more. :D

I really liked your description of young Ayme. I also liked the brief explanation of Folon's past as an experiment. Normally there two don't get much love, but you did a great job!

I like your writing style a lot. Really can't wait to see more from you.

P.S. You spelled "confidante" wrong. Hehe?