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DarkWing Gibbs
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
Oh I would so park my foot in my boss' ass for even attempting to spank me.
But...I'm actually called Gibbs in real life. I was named Gibbs by an NCIS fan teacher in tenth grade. Before I knew a darn about the show. She said in quotes " I'm calling you Gibbs, You might as well be my favorite character on one of my crime shows". I only equaled the two together recenty like 3 months ago. I'm 21 now and graduated Highschool in 2008.
But If I had a boss like Gibbs who reinforced a punishment with comfort. I think I could handle it.
I love the whole paddle thing.
I made a frat paddle because of one of these stories. Totally for shits and giggles.
Stories good.
elenya-grace
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Why did I never review this? Well, better late than never! Really awesome one-shot. Loved that Gibbs hugged Tony and comforted him but did not expect him to be all emotional like Tim.
after reading the line: ‘You think I don’t know that, DiNozzo? It wasn’t just a woodworking project, you know.’ I'd love to read a flashback of a younger, stubborn Gibbs ;-) Idk if anyone has ever written about that.
Anyways, I'll stop my ramblings! Great story, sorry it has taken me so long to review
troubled heart
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
Could've used a little more detail but it was good. I like your stories.
JadeAlmasy
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
I miss Tonys pranks on the show! i wish he would do the whoopee cushion with Vance! lol

Great job!

Jade
NCIS Semper-Fi
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
*Sighs* Just perfect! As always, there were so many things to love about this one: Tony deliberately provoking a spanking, Gibbs using his paddle on Tony, and that last line! Kind of sums up the whole relationship, doesn't it?
diana2122
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
"Just wanted to let you know I did it this time" Oh that was so cute. Nice story. Thank you!
wandamarie
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
it was a good chapter thank you hope you up date soon thank you
Ocsargirl
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Once again you amaze me. You are a gifted story teller.
Nana
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
:)You made my day
AislingK
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Just pure awesomeness here from beginning to end. You've managed to pack so much goodness into such a short story. I loved it.
Visitkarte
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Aww! So sweet, he used his own paddle and called him 'son'! <3 <3 <3 Well, he did behave like a bratty son!
affleckfan08
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
i love how sweet and understanding gibbs is to tony now!..cause he can tell how much of a struggle it is for him to both want and need comfort but not be able to accept it very easily!!...and the attention...even the bad kind ;)
AshleyMarieHalliwell
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
That was really the perfect way to go about it. Congrats!
terra fea1
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
My heart did the happy dance when I saw the summary for this fic. I was like 'whoo hoo Accountability!'...anyway...Tony being that much a prankster was a bit overdone (gotta keep it real, dawg) he'd never with Abby n Bert. But Tim. And the Keyboard. Again. Oh yes! and still SO hysterical anyway! loved the mtac whoopie cushion! and it's so Tony to try and bring about the inevitable. But I really liked just the simple line at the very end when Gibbs notes how Tony doesn't cling like Tim always does. I can so see Tim clinging and whining like the little baby brother that he is. And i liked that you didn't go for the potential melodrama. It was sweet and cathartic...for all of us. Ah, this morning is off to a good start. Thanks :)
tina m 1978
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Like the rest of your stories, I really love this one. Tony has a speacial talent for getting in trouble.
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