OH! i love the ending! :D

hahaha! I know Susan is very much like the rest of us (thinking that McGee is...*drool*...*snaps out of it*) anyways (lol) I couldn't help but think "O BURN!" at the end of this chapter haha! Sorry, no idea why I find that funny, but I just do...lol

good chapter."Susan Grady was not one to give up easily, but her parents had raised her to respect other people’s territory" , I loved this line.

Oh. My. God. This is amazing.

:') This one is really good!

Aw I love this one!

This one is cute. You keep them very in character.

I really, really like this one.

Just today have I ventured away from "Law and Order:SVU" Fanfics, and I have to say, I love this already. Can't wait to read more :)

Damn right it's Abby's territory. I always did wonder what happened to her. The writer kind of just let that drop.

Awesome chapter! Looking forward to more!

"Susan Grady was not one to give up easily, but her parents had raised her to respect other people’s territory." - Good thing Susan saw that invisible "Property of Abigail Sciuto" label that is all over Timmy.

"Timmy, sometimes you’re so clueless about women it’s distressing.” - Er, Abby? You know this about Timmy, and yet you are just sitting there saying it?! So start cluing in the boy then, already! Honestly!
“Which is probably why she’s having such a hard time talking to him right now,” McGee acknowledged. “Gibbs, too. She’ll come around, Abs, she just needs time to realize that even making big mistakes can’t stop your real friends from caring about you. We don’t need to throw logical arguments at her, we just have to make sure she knows we’re still here for her.” She sat back, nodding. “You’re not that clueless about women after all, Tim." - Yay for Timmy not being that clueless!

I love this story! All 25 chappies were easy to read, and awesomely in-character and appropriate to each episode. :) The dialogue is so sweet, and the whole bat on his chest thing was ADORABLE and I ccan totally imagine Abby freaking out to that degree when they went off to Somalia. I am a little miffed they didn't put some of the plane ride back in, I think that it was some important stuff of "oh, how are you doing after we thought YOU WERE DEAD." Well done, can't wait for more!

I've started watching NCIS with an eye open for where your chapters are going to slide in. I like that :)
Needless to say, another great chapter.

"For real, Timmy, sometimes you're so clueless about women it's distressing." I am going to have to post that as one of my favorite quotes on my profile.