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Riskreader
2009-12-06 . chapter 13
Well, ending seems as though the timeline is an snake just eating its own tail. Though I have to say was really the end of skynet in the future? or did it send a piece of itself in the past? on John perhaps?

Resistance future might have a chance depending on who's next in charge & if their compent.

Looking forward to whatever you write in this verse. grab you by the throat reading to be sure.
lesshiding
2009-12-01 . chapter 13
This is by far one of the best written stories I've seen. You've managed to keep it very professional and consistant. The way you write your characters makes it a very visual experience that adds a lot of depth without making me feel like I'm getting overly crammed with information.

I'd love to have more of your work to read, and I tend to stick with the tscc section, so I hope you're considering a sequal. I did get a little confused at the very end wondering if/why Cameron chose to push John into the time sphere, as well as the significance of the silver drop he "could've" imagined around the same point.

btw, if you have time and like to read tscc yourself, you should checkout "the killer i created". It and two other drama style stories (along with yours) are gold to me. "persephone" is the other one that I can remember at this time, but it's a very wordy style that I can see some people not getting into (though i personally love it). There were a couple others, but they've been getting lax as they go on it seems, whereas you've kept up the entire way (maybe you had more pre-planning, I don't know). Great job.
Jarvey
2009-11-26 . chapter 13
Well done, bravo!
Stormbringer951
2009-11-26 . chapter 13
A very interesting story about Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles. It's a sort-of continuation to the series, set after season two. John Connor is in the future, desperately trying to stop Skynet while Sarah works to prevent it's creation in her own timeline.

It's ... different to a lot of the stories that are out so far, with a very different take on time travel and a darker, grimmer look at the world post-Judgement Day. It's certainly worth a read.

Good work, LithiumDoll.
Tagrea
2009-11-26 . chapter 13
Loved it
umino-gaara
2009-11-25 . chapter 13
Some of the stuff kinda went over my head, but overall this was excellent. I think my favorite character besides John was the dog Hijo. That's one dog I wouldn't mind having as a pet.
Lady Invisible
2009-11-09 . chapter 9
I am so in love with this!

Plus, it looks like you are still updating, double score!

Seriously, you have them so in character and the techno lingo is perfect. This, I imagine, would really be something the show might have done.

Really, you are giving me peace of mind, just a little.

Please, update soon!
umino-gaara
2009-11-08 . chapter 9
This story is disserving of many more reviews...and I totally can't spell. I was so sad when they cancelled this series so it's nice to see someone taking the time to write a long and plausable fic. Lots of cool stuff going on.
Stormbringer951
2009-10-29 . chapter 8
A rather nice chapter, illustrating the tensions of Jesse and Sarah's acquantaince. Your story has a nostalgic and weirdly tense feeling here. I like it.

I also feel sorry for Savannah, having to live on the run. Poor girl :(
Jayy
2009-10-03 . chapter 7
I have to say, I love what you've done! You're taking up all these loose ends and tying them together beautifully, and I can't wait to see where you take us. Too bad the series ended and we'll never know what they planned for future!John and present!Sarah.
Stormbringer951
2009-09-10 . chapter 7
Another exciting chapter as always. The piece of the T-1001 was a very interesting plot token/McGuffin. I'm a bit sorry that Savannah's dead - but with the new leader in John Connor I'm interested to know how this continues.
Stormbringer951
2009-08-31 . chapter 6
Ooh, another chapter. This is quickly shaping up into one of my favourite stories.
fairedust
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
This story was going so well! I would really like to see you continue. I liked finding out that Sarah was at least able to postpone JD by another 4 yrs. John was right. It allowed Derek to become a man and get atleast some training. It allowed Kyle to be in his mid-teens (the age that our Derek was) This giving them both a better ability to survive, adjust. John, with all his unexpected knowledge is still creating the legend of his mother. And somehow Catherine was able to aquire the photo. Well done Catherine. But still, this story seems like a beginning. Please decide to continue it further.
Riverchild
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
This is definitely the best Born to Run continuation on this sight. I love it and hope you continue; you're a great writer.
dc
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
its a really good start hope u update soon
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