Sweet! Such a beautiful relationship now. I hope that when you get to Lompoc you'll show how Dom's character really shifted. As for now, this fluffy kid stuff is so appropriate! Can't wait for the next time jump!

The Tran-Toretto feud began so young! Awesome chapter, can't wait to see how their smoultering personalities develop. I really like that include Mia in so much because in the first movie I thought her place in the actual team was clipped and out of focus.

Interesting way of ending. It kind of left us up in the air, intrigued with what is to come. Once again nicely written. Despite the lack of a proof read ;0). More emotion would nice but not to much because unlike most stories I believe you stay true to the personalities of the characters.

Nice writing. It was uncomplicated and easy to follow, unlike others I have read. Nicely done. I can't wait to read more, I think you set yourself up very nicely to have time gaps that fit the story.

Now maybe Suki will break up with him and we can get back to Dom and Letty. Sorry don't like Dom with Suki lol. I Like the new chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great writing and please post more soon.
Tanya

Hey you have got the beginings of a great story and you havnt even gotten to the good part yet. Keep writing so i can keep reading,
Xo Es.

I love the closeness that Letty has for her father and all the similiarites and traits they have in common. So sad to see him go, but I hope we read about him popping up again.

Still hating Suki, can't wait until she's out of the picture

I like the turn of events that have happened and look for to the next update. It's getting so good and I hope the next chapter is just as long! :)

Zomg yess! I loved this chappie, thank you for updating!

wow...that was a great chapter...i love that they're so long...but it's gotta be ruled ILLEGAL to leave cliffs like THAT! I'm not saying i dont dig Suki..cuz i guess for a friend she's cool and all, but im soo over her..im ready for Dom to be over her too..haha but i could live with a little more jealous tantrums over Letty and Dom's 'relationship'...lol i think that's awesome...but why is Letty pushing so hard for him to be with Suki? it's almost like..thats her way of denial...of course i have no idea..it's your story..and i LOVE it...you can never go wrong some good DOTTY...update soon gurl. GREAT job- keep it up!

alex_diesel

UPDATE SOON!

Each chapter I always say to myself this is my absolute favorite, but seriously this one just might take the cake over the rest. Again, I've told you this before, I love all the details you add (i.e. letty and her dad both loving horror movies and into converse shoes) very nice. You piece everything together nicely. I love the turn of events that have transpired. There are no words describe how much I am enjoying this story. Please keep up the superb work and update very soon, for my sanity, please! :)

Oh I hate that suki... she needs to be put in her place

Again another fantastic chapter.Loving ntinue soon ? :)

Great chapter!! I liked it that Letty's father finally came back to see her just like he said he would. Also I liked it that her dad decided that he would stay at the house with Letty when she asked him to stay.lol I love this part:

He got an even greater kick out of the boyfriend straighten himself out to attempt to look tough. He assumed her boyfriend was slightly intimidated by the military uniform.

I thought it was really funny how Letty's mom's boyfriend tried to make himself look tough in front of Juan.Also lol at Mia when she races home, and she starts talking really quick to her dad asking if she could go along with Letty and her dad.I liked it when Tony and Juan meet that they started talking about cars, and how Tony liked talking to Juan about cars, because he knew a lot about cars already.I also thought this part was really funny:

“Let’s have lunch before any of that,” Vince proposed.

Mia frowned at Vince. “Lunch? You’ve got to be kidding me……you just got done eating a massive bowl of ice cream, and who knows what else. Your stomach can manage through a few hours of shopping or a movie.”

Vince rolled his eyes. “Whatever, I vote for lunch.”

I found it funny that Letty and Juan both were so into watching the horro movie, and how scared Mia got over it lol, and would grab onto Vince's arm.lol.Also I liked it that Dom was thinking that he would have rather been with Letty to see her being hapy about her dad coming back. Then being with Suki.Oh wow I didn't expect Letty to say that she thought Dom and Suki were good together, and then say that he should invite Suki out with them.I liked it that they started racing go karts, and how Letty bet Dom.It was nice of Dom to blow Suki off to go and see if Letty was alright. I really liked it that he did that. I'm really not liking suki in this fanfiction.Also I liked it that you took the line that Dom said in the short film that they made. I'm sensing that Dom and Suki are going to break up next chapter. Suki seems to be rally ** off that Dom is just hanging out with Letty. hmm so if they break up then that makes room for Dom and Letty to get togethr!! =) I cant wait to read the next chapter so i can see what will happen next!! =)

I absolutely loved all the parts with letty's dad in it. It was so sad when he had to leave. Hate that Suki is still around. Hate that Letty is content with just being Dom's friend. LOVE that Suki is jealous of Letty. Fantastic writing, wonderful plot and storyline. Please update asap!