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jagged1
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
Even though it was a sad piece with Chuck trying to deal with Bryce's death (again), there were some funny lines too that balanced it out - not willing to give up all childish things, like COD, and remembering the prickles bush.
But I absolutely loved the ending - Chuck keeping his secret and leaving no tracks!
Thanks.
nattylovesjordy
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
I. Really. Really. Really. Liked it. Like, a lot.
It was short, but... good. Kinda comical in a way.
My favorite part? Along with the puppy analogy? This paragraph...
"I am so tired. Something about having the new … you know what … in my head seems to take it out of me. Won’t say it. Can’t. Casey’d kill me. Except he came to my rescue because I called. Maybe this is the start of a beautiful friendship after all … Yeah, right. Last time I suggested that I ended up in the bushes. It took me days to get all the prickles out of my skin."
It. Was. AMAZING. Made me laugh.
So yes.
Is there going to be more? I surely hope so!
Angelle Marcs
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
I don't watch Chuck. Have way too much on my plate, but I loved how this is written. You give us a look inside a mind that is going on overdrive and I love the changing of subjects and the rants...nicely written!
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