This was great I love how they're not in love with each other, but they could be, it's like real. You could totally tell that H was just worried about the power and not about the fact his marriage could be over with the woman he 'loves'. That fan was crazy, like obsessed and probably would gloat about meeting Chris and call him her friend or something. I know I'd be all like STEPH! SMOOCHY! But such a great chapter, I love this story and want more!

GREAT chapter! Love it! Update soon :)

I'm glad he was able to get to his match, Stephanie was smart to think of that one and Shane was a good brother to help. I like that he's on Stephanie's side with this, but he still gently teases her, like a real big brother would. Now just get them together and I'll be happy.

Can't wait till the whole explosion and meeting happens!

Hmm...both admitted they don't "love" each other but definitely could. That's a start :-) Also, both are getting a divorce - another good start. Still going to be interesting how they finally get out of the arena AFTER Chris' match, IF he even gets to complete his match - Paul could still go out there and disrupt it. Can't wait to read more!

I like that this chapter was a little more serious. They're starting to figure out what they both want and I'm really glad to know that what they both want is each other. They really deserve each other and I want them to be happy and I think they're discovering they're happier together. That fan was hilarious and at least it gave Steph time to come up with a plan. I hope that Paul never finds them lol

Man, I'm so mad at myself! I typed the perfect review and my stupid phone deleted it in a matter of seconds! Ugh, not cool. Now to try to remember what I said...

Paul is dumber than I thought he was if he really believes that Shane is on his side through all of this with Stephanie. Really, is he on drugs or something? He can't sense that Shane doesn't even like him? I can't wait until Stephanie drops the bombshell on him that she's leaving him. It's been a long time coming.

I'm glad that Stephanie and Chris seem to be on the same page here. There's definitely something there and I think they owe it to themselves to figure out what it is. I think they'll be good together and I'm happy that they're going to leave their marriages in the dust and explore it.

That fan was totally crazy! Who did you base her character on? I think I'd be totally tongue-tied if I ever came face to face with Chris. And with Stephanie by his side? I'd probably blurt out something like, "Oh my God, this is so Smoochy! I knew you guys were screwing around!" And then I'd be so embarrassed! Lol.

Loved this chapter and I can't wait to see where this goes!

~J

LOL...LMAOROTF! This was pure genius. This story is so freakin funny it's awesome. Now don't get me wrong it has it's serious parts and stuff but I just love the humor in here. Now I got to go back and look at the genere/s you have this story under. LOL! How did you come up with this story idea? I love it!! ;-)

See?!
She wouldn't leave him =]
She was smart to text Paul!
Update soon!

OK!! First, of all the places Paul decides to sit over the table Steph was under... for a moment I thought he knew she was there and he was doing it to play mind games with her! Thank God that wasn't the case and that she managed to send him off.
I'm also glad that she made it to Chris on time! But before that, I felt bad for Chris, he was thinking the worst happened (that she told Paul that he forced her!)
It was kind of funny when he carried her on his shoulder... and out the building!! lol, doesn't matter, screw the match and screw Paul and Shawn!! I say they should make a run...
Great update, loved it so much!

Sorry i didnt review this chapter sooner! =( But i LOVED it! Stephanie is one smart cookie ;) I didnt think she was ever gonna get out from under that table! Thank God she did! lol! My favorite part in this chapter was the way you descbribed chris carrying her over his shoulder. It was hilarious! You wrote it perfectly and i could totally picture it! :D But he locked them out of the arena...LOL! This story is getting so good and i can't wait to see how they get back inside! You are an excellent writer ;)

HAHA this was really a cute and quirky chapter ...loved it

Lord Jesus help them lol

This chapter is amazing, can't wait for the next one

I'm glad Stephanie got there :D I was most worried about she'd get there and he'd be gone =( BUt that was not the case. I really liked this chapter, especially them getting locked outside, cause...that imagery is just funny lol - what I laughed at even more tho was Chris running with Steph and like the crowd seeing that, it's just hilarious.

Paul is an idiot, but I should have guessed he'd go find Shawn. Butt friends for life!

It's so awesome that they're moving forward in their relationship, cause she kissed him and *sighs* awesome.

I really loved this chapter, but really, how could I not? I cannot wait to see what else you come up with in this story.

Jodi