Aw, man! I wanted to see Wufei's reaction!

Very nice. I really loved the story line. A bit predictable, but done with taste. You keep the interest going, which is the important thing.

You kept the character in character for the most part and the lemon was perfect.

You really have a way with words where most people have difficulty, which makes you a very talented writer. I'm very impressed and look forward to seeing more from you!

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