Very interesting. I like this a lot. Bold stylistic choice, but it works quite well. I think you got the Lorelai/Rory dialogue spot on, and I loved the bantering about who was going to kill who. The entire town *would* kill Lorelai--but they do love their reenactments.

aww i could so go for a sequel of this right about now... update if you feel the desire to do a sequel...

good story

Aw, I loved it. And I like the style in which you have written this, very intersting. (: