MARY SUES HAVE TO DIE!


Isabella.
IS A DEAD MEAT.

Omg in Lady Gaga's new song she shouts "CUZ I AM A FREE BITCH!"

Irrelevant.

Remind how do we do that review thingy again.

Teehee.

"Work it,move it,bitch"

teehee.

I love this story! I agree; death to all Mary Sues.

I detest Mary Sue's - probably not as much as a certain author on this site, but I'm right behind her :)

You should definitely do more like this. I want to see then all die horribly. I, myself, am considering writing a fic where all these Sues die in very painful ways, though it probably won't be as funny as this.

Lmao! I have a baseball bat. I shall have to keep it locked up xD

Nice chapter!! xD

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hahaha cleaning my balls!
Ouch, I saw that coming.
PAIN.

Will there be more?
Beywriter

Hahaha brilliant XD Loved the extra chapter XD

Hey!
Thank you for doing this!
I LOVE IT!
Lol!
I'm really grateful!
It's ok about my name!
I'm really happy at the moment!
Because of this, I got rid of a prick of a boyfriend and I've finally got my first ever story up!
Yay!
Thank you again!
Bye bye!

Hello again,
Lovin' this story aswell!
Could you do one for Michael though?
If not ok,
If so Thank you!
Lol!

Xx-Blood.Stained.Roses.-xX

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I was expecting Brooklyn to push her in front of a bus!
well wrote!
Bravo! Bravo!

can't wait for more!
how about Ray? or Tyson?
Please update soon

Beywriter

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Will there be a Chapter like they all go to jail for the killings or something?

haha, the pillow...great!


Beywriter

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Wow, I never imagined Max would kill!
Rat poison?
Genious!
hahahahaha


Beywriter

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This reminds me of a Scifi Tv show yet it was the girl killing the guy who would download into another body and be back later...

haha, funny...I totally know Bryan has it in him to kill too...he nearly got Ray.


Beywriter

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I always knew Tala had it in him.
I always KNEW IT!

Beywriter

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wow, violent!
hahahaha...

I've heard the expression but I can't remember...what are Mary Sues?


Beywriter

Haha, these are hilarious. You must make more!

DIE BITCHES, DIE!

Lol, I think I love you for this, really o.o

I'm so sick of seeing all of these MarySues and OCs floating around; they're fucking EVERYWHERE!

I know this is fanfiction, but people just take it way too damn far nowadays.