Oh. I thought these were all so beautiful and lovely.

Suteki!! Omg I love it! All of it, but the ones that killed all over were

17. Tears

42. Clouds

Excellent work! :D

I loved it very much!
It's amazing how much you managed to convey with only a few words! :)
In those short sentences I saw the love, the gentleness, the warmth and the teasing of Haruka and Michiru's relationships. As well as you managed to convery Haruka's special feelings for Usagi. It was awesome!
Thank you very much for this piece!
It's wonderful :)

Best wishes,
Nury

I really loved this. Some of the sentences were kind of awkward, but I think that's to be expected when you only have one sentence to tell your story in. You really captured the relationship between Haruka and Michiru well. My favorite is eleven. Good job! :)

This is without a doubt, my most heartfelt compliment: this is absolutely brilliant.

There's a certain maturity in these sentences that perfectly captures the essence of the HM relationship: and man did you capture it properly.

It's rare to find something so short, so well-written and so comprehensive. If anything, it was like a mix of the best parts of HM fics.

Know that I think about it, it's like an accelerated fic. Very cool. So, in saying this, you've made my day.

Wow, this was really fun to read! Especially #14 just made me laugh! Really good job!! :D

great job!

again, heart heart heart! ;)

I really enjoyed reading this. I like your portrayal of Haruka and Michiru, and I hope I get to read some more of your writings in the future. :)

Wow...that was extremely good and well written. There were some minor mistakes here and there, but nothing too serious to even take away from your great writing style and use of words to explain these emotions and everything else along with it. I really enjoyed this, and hope to be reading more H/M fics from you in the future. :) Good job.

i really liked this, it was very well written although in some of them it didn't make sense i think at the end of 'forever' was one of them and i think you had some spelling mistakes but apart from that it was awesome