This is really good so far!
its different from the other relationship stories cos they're actually doing stuff :P
im just about to read the next chapters, but i think its awesome so far!

Hey...this is Hanna- just saying thank u for choosing my idea, and it's fine that you tweaked it, I thought it was cool...I haven't been able 2 get on in a while, but you're doing pretty good I think
Keep the story going, and don't give up!

POST MORE!

Hey, thanks for the shout out (or I guess I would be a write out...ha ha ha), anyway back to ideas... hm I kind of still thinking about it, but here are my ideas

1) you could have it that Sara and Elliot neve have had intercourse but all they have done is played around because there both to scared to go all the way, or,

2) Ann and Charlie could say that it's part of a plan or something( the is my least favorite one so don't do it) or you could also,

3) Have Jake be spying on them when they are talkng about things

cant wait for next chapters!!

Love your story it's good to know that someone else lobes cheaper by the dozen like I do. I love the plot of the story you twisted a very Disney story into one that people in their late teens and 20 and 30s would Luke and who even knows mybe older people too. You asked how old people were I personally am 18, and sorry I can't help you with any songs my brothers all say that my taste in music is horrible. Keep on writing!

Hey im melanie and i loved your story its good so far but the chapters are kind of short . Oh and sen e you asked I'm a young adult I gues you could say I'm 18 if that helps you a little more but I'm going to turn 19 in the next couple of weeks ... So. Oh and for songs if you want love songs/ break up songs I love bust your windows by Jazmin Sullivan. Or Slide by the goo goo dolls. I hope that helps you and Ill be chcking up to see when your next chapter is in.

Hey I loved your latest chapter o i cant wait for he next one

post more! a dare? um... how about someone dare jake to run around outside the house with just his underwear? lolz

Hey, Kels, is this you? Cause I'm seriously confused...is this part one or not? Jeez, just tell me! *hits*

This seems o-kay, but I'm confused, so...yeah. Um. Love You.

This is Ana by the way <3

I am a teen...15 love your stories keep them coming

oh well maybe the dads could be fighting about which kid started this underage sex and jake is trying to tell them it's Sarah and Eliot who are the kids and when they heard what Jake had said, they start yelling at each other again then the whole family heards about it and then... you can make it up from there.

oh and I would love to be your beta for this story. a beta is like an editor, kind of. they find your mistakes/grammor errors and spelling errors and help you come up with new ideas when the writer gets writer's block. that's the main idea. so yeah, let me know if I can be your beta if you like.

hey so I like your plot idea so far. but first, the first two chapters are the same, and how old is Sarah and Eloit?

I definatly think Sarah and Elliot should find out who Jake called, (maybe have them freak out about it...), and either have the parents or someone coming home, or have them Jake get Sarah and Elliot on the line with their parents screaming at them...

Good Job, I hope you continue... ;)

I think you should do 1 but, they don't tell jake that they are coming so that they don't know, and everyone is surprissed...not to mention pissed at jake when they find out