 RiceballNinja 4/2/10 . chapter 6nice story!i loved it! |
 Hocapontas 8/4/09 . chapter 6That is one of THE shortest chapters I've ever read! Why hasn't Dumbledore done anything? Is Sirius going to do a blood adoption? I hope so I am SO looking forward to the next chapter! |
 AyianaHightopp 12/1/08 . chapter 6oh my gawd i just can't wiat write more please!
i would love to see how he starts hogwarts!
plaese ghosts of lily evans and james potter protect sirius remus and harry from the idiotic ministry.
v.v poor sirius v.v
question any remusxsirius or harryxdarco in this fic?
then Sirius and Remus could be like mum and dad! |
 Amelie de Lorraine 8/19/07 . chapter 6 I liked this story. Why'd you discontinue it? Please keep writing. Merci!
Amelie |
 DarkAngel048 12/17/05 . chapter 6good fic! |
 sweetteetwo 11/16/05 . chapter 6please up date soon I like this fic and I hope they clear Siruis real soon |
 Hitorirewiewy person 8/21/04 . chapter 6 I think it's fidelius, but I don't know 'cause mom stole my book three...
I'm very good at remembering things that aren't shcool related! Wich starts in a week! EVIL!
Oh yeah. Very good story. I like it. |
 tori potter 8/18/04 . chapter 6i hope u write more |
 Professor Authordude 3/18/04 . chapter 6 Cool story, and "Fidelius" coming from the Latin root "fdelius, fidelii" Sorry, I take Latin and love it to pieces. |
 cassy 1/22/04 . chapter 6 It's Fidelius charm,
just so you know.
Your story is kind of cute,
and the plots developing slowly but well. |
 Amy the hyper caffeine addict 12/24/03 . chapter 6It's Fidelius, I'm pretty sure. Please write more. |
 elmo undead 10/19/03 . chapter 6Argh...evil cliffy...please, please, please contiune! YOU!MUST!POST!
HAPPY HOWLING!
Wishing you the best of luck next full moon,
Charlie Black |
 Hyperbole 7/3/03 . chapter 6 Nitpicking time:
Okay, the charm is the *Fidelius* charm.
*Filius Flitwick* is the exact spelling of his name.
These details are available from the Harry Potter Lexicon - /
It's a great site for almost any referencing needs concerning HP (although they are still working on updating the information to include OOtP).
Something else I want to pick at: I'm not sure if Fudge was in power at the time.
[Slight OOtP spoiler]
Book 5 refers to Fudge's predecessor by name (I've forgotten to name though, it was only mentioned once & it's been almost two weeks since I read the book) but I just realised it doesn't say when he came into office. What I do know is that Crouch Snr was on a fast-track to the position of Minister before his son's trial & was the one who locked Sirius away (in canon).
It's an iffy subject in my mind, I need to check over the facts better some time. |
 Gusha 4/19/03 . chapter 6Interesting. The love of Harry kept him from tracking Pettigrew down right away. With Dumbledore's support, they should be able to work this out. |
 Random person 387 1/20/03 . chapter 6 Actually it's Fidelius. But whatever. Good story, keep it up. |