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Hocapontas
2009-08-04 . chapter 6
That is one of THE shortest chapters I've ever read! Why hasn't Dumbledore done anything? Is Sirius going to do a blood adoption? I hope so> I am SO looking forward to the next chapter!
emoXbellaXduaghterofthereaper
2008-12-01 . chapter 6
oh my gawd i just can't wiat write more please!
i would love to see how he starts hogwarts!
plaese ghosts of lily evans and james potter protect sirius remus and harry from the idiotic ministry.

v.v poor sirius v.v

question any remusxsirius or harryxdarco in this fic?
then Sirius and Remus could be like mum and dad!
Amelie de Lorraine
2007-08-19 . chapter 6
I liked this story. Why'd you discontinue it? Please keep writing. Merci!

Amelie
animeangel088
2005-12-17 . chapter 6
good fic!
sweetteetwo
2005-11-16 . chapter 6
please up date soon I like this fic and I hope they clear Siruis real soon
Hitori`rewiewy person
2004-08-21 . chapter 6
I think it's fidelius, but I don't know 'cause mom stole my book three...
I'm very good at remembering things that aren't shcool related! Wich starts in a week! EVIL!!
Oh yeah. Very good story. I like it.
tori potter
2004-08-18 . chapter 6
i hope u write more
Professor Authordude
2004-03-18 . chapter 6
Cool story, and "Fidelius" coming from the Latin root "fdelius, fidelii" Sorry, I take Latin and love it to pieces.
cassy
2004-01-22 . chapter 6
It's Fidelius charm,
just so you know.
Your story is kind of cute,
and the plots developing slowly but well.
Amy the hyper caffeine addict
2003-12-24 . chapter 6
It's Fidelius, I'm pretty sure. Please write more.
elmo undead
2003-10-19 . chapter 6
Argh...evil cliffy...please, please, please contiune! YOU!MUST!POST!

HAPPY HOWLING!

Wishing you the best of luck next full moon,
Charlie Black
Hyperbole
2003-07-03 . chapter 6
Nitpicking time:
Okay, the charm is the *Fidelius* charm.
*Filius Flitwick* is the exact spelling of his name.
These details are available from the Harry Potter Lexicon - http://w.hp-lexicon.org/
It's a great site for almost any referencing needs concerning HP (although they are still working on updating the information to include OOtP).

Something else I want to pick at: I'm not sure if Fudge was in power at the time.
[Slight OOtP spoiler]
Book 5 refers to Fudge's predecessor by name (I've forgotten to name though, it was only mentioned once & it's been almost two weeks since I read the book) but I just realised it doesn't say when he came into office. What I do know is that Crouch Snr was on a fast-track to the position of Minister before his son's trial & was the one who locked Sirius away (in canon).
It's an iffy subject in my mind, I need to check over the facts better some time.
Gusha
2003-04-19 . chapter 6
Interesting. The love of Harry kept him from tracking Pettigrew down right away. With Dumbledore's support, they should be able to work this out.
Random person #387
2003-01-20 . chapter 6
Actually it's Fidelius. But whatever. Good story, keep it up.
Diva-Elf
2002-09-16 . chapter 6
Very good. Continue.
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