 empath89 2009-11-30 . chapter 10Sorry it took me so long! Was away on vacation...
Loved this chapter. It was so good. And 'Son' was all kinds of awesome here. Can't wait for more!
hugs...empath |
 Sirius-chan 2009-11-29 . chapter 10dbkhbgnvndcgnii! You'd better not let him die again or I will find a way to sue you or something! It shouldn't be allowed to write such tragic fics!
More seriously, I would never have thought of such an unexpected twist! Glad to see Son back!
I feel like it's been ages since we last talk! I hope you're doing well and that you'll update this fic soon :) Congratulations again for winning NaNoWriMo (again..)! :p |
 2009-11-29 . chapter 10 NO! SHO!! DO NOT DIE!?!!
Son remembers?!! Aiyaah...
This chapter was badass! 8D |
 Jaded Expression of Euphoria 2009-11-29 . chapter 10OHMAIGAWD! OH MY GODS! Plot thickens! Plotthickening! *frantically waving arms and hopping on one foot at a time* :0
I'd give a better comment but right now I'm kinda ticked off at some things. So this is the best your going to get. Sorry. :(
-Jaded |
 CloudxKadajLover 2009-11-28 . chapter 10"When he had been a vampire he had enjoyed the rain for it was the only time when he could venture out during the day" - This reminded me of my lil fic on LJ! ^_^ Made me smile!
And lol, I love how like, when Kei was a vampire, he constantly bitched about it and now that he's human, he hates it too! XD It's such a lose-lose situation. Poor Kei! It did make me giggle though at the whole "Now that he was human, he suddenly realized how slow he was" thing. Makes the human race seem so useless doesn't he? And OMG Son! He has a chance to make up for his bastard deeds by saving Sho! Who I really thought had died because I knew Kei wouldn't be able to do anything. But then I was like "Sho can't die! He's...well, Sho! XD" Anyway, great job with this!! <3 Though the past is kinda repeating itself, it's still different in its own way. |
 Sayuri 2009-11-28 . chapter 10 No, Sho Cant die! Fate is so cruel! :'( |
 Yei 2009-11-28 . chapter 10See, I told you I'm bad with reviewing. Sorry, I meant to review the last chapter, but then it slipped my mind *bows down low in apology*
Anyway, I'm completely surprised by this chapter. Well, not the whole chapter - just Son's appearance. I didn't think he'd be Tian, even though I guessed that An is Yi-Che from the first time she appeared in the fic. Of course it's obvious now, but at that time I was still trying to see if Kano was Son, as unlikely as that seemed...
Anyway, that so much angst. I really liked the part where Kei went out to get the gun, but forgot his limitations as a human - it illustrated so very well how confusing it must be with two sets of memories, two different ways of reacting.
And for Sho to be shot like that again... I'm completely in denial though, and I'm completely sure that he'll be okay. Somehow.
And it's so... I don't how to call this, not awesome, but it's... I guess genius how much you made all of their relationships so much more complicated. There's the fact that Luka killed "Shinji" (as I've already mentioned) and now Son has reason to blame Sho for Yi-Che. It must be making it so confusing and hard to know what to feel towards whom, for all the guys...
I really, really love this fic. |
 Saku-chan 2009-11-24 . chapter 9 Upadate!! :D
I want to see what happens to Sho, Kei and Luka! :3 |
 0928soubi at docomo.ne.jp 2009-11-08 . chapter 9It seems that when Shoichi gets **, he reacts very violently to Kei...I know if someone I cared about kept pushing me around like that, I'd probably smack em. DX Still, I really like this story. Please, update soon? |
 0928soubi at docomo.ne.jp 2009-11-07 . chapter 5Poor Shoichi! Aaw, he loves Keiichi so much! ,,>.<,, I love how you named them. ^.^ It's a really good story. |
 emikoxchan 2009-10-27 . chapter 9wow! this story is getting really good (not that it wasn't before ;] ) Keep up the great work!
I love how Kei is doing his best to protect Sho from the past :] |
 Sayuri 2009-10-27 . chapter 9 It just got better! I thought there was no way, but you did it! Continue, this is beautiful! |
 Sirius-chan 2009-10-27 . chapter 9My gosh, just how are you going to do to get things through between them three?! And it is SO incredibly good to see Sho face Luka! I never realised it before, but it really makes my heart beat faster to see them meet! My god, this fic is a pearl xD |
 larc-addict 2009-10-26 . chapter 9 this is getting intense. sho is always jealous of luka but he never met that man. but now, finally, they meet face to face. sho and luka rivalry makes this plot more griping. i'd love to see more conversation or heated argument between luka and sho. im also relief kei isn't turn again cuz he deserves to be human in this life. although im happy their past self have re-emerged, but i don't want them to dominate this story either. you're a very smart writer for maintaining the balance between their past and present self. and the connection to Through The Ages is really a wise move :)
keep this up! |
 CloudxKadajLover 2009-10-26 . chapter 9...*speechless* WOW. Dude, have you ever seen Last Quarter? (The other movie HYDE was in? XDD) Because this is EXACTLY what this reminds me of, with the whole reincarnation thing and the former self or "soul" gaining consciousness in their new body...holy crow! XD Never thought vampires could be reincarnated, but I guess so! So it WAS Luka the entire time! Dang. Now that I think about it, it makes so much sense now! XD Just...wow, man. You are amazing. Really. The way you organized this is just GENIUS! I was sitting here reading the first part like O_O. AHH I LOVE YOUR FICS! <3 And, yes, my dear angsty Kei is back! *huggles him* How I missed him. AND THANK YOU for keeping him human! :D This'll be interesting! Omgosh, but Sho still isn't aware! Are they going to break up now?! And I just wonder what Luka is trying to accomplish through all this...I have to admit though, the slight jealously between him and Sho amuses me. XD |
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