what i meant was is that u just mentioned dark danielle in one chapter and then the very next chapter its already a few years in the future after the world has already been devastated by her. you never explained how it got to that point.

i know this is a little late but y did you suddenly skip to where everyhing was destroyed by evil danielle when you just introduced future evil danielle 2 chapters ago and then the next one is suddenly a few years in the future and evil danielle is already terrorizing everyone

what the hell just happened at the end there

oo poor people loved the chapter update soon

i never thought i say this but poor dan that must have hurt loved the chapter udpate son

This is getting good!

take your time man hope everything turns out all right

o no poor azz and dan has gone good cool loved the chapter updae soon

uh o thats bad loved it please udpate soon really good chapter

ha ha loved the last two chapter really good update soon loved it

Cool Chapter! I like the whole Ember thing she's my favprite ghost on the show

I love it! who is the trainer? Is it valorie? Or someone else?

uh o ember that is cool and sam fenton ha we all know thats going to happen loved it please update soon really good

Good Story so far keep it up and I can't wait to here more

awsome chapter update soon poor dani i feel so bad loved it though update soon