Cute! ♥

...in Kaylee's words... SHINY! *squee!* i love it!

:D MSC

When I first read the Mal & River pairing, I wasn't too enthuised on reading, but I decided to give it a chance and ended up enjoying it greatly. Thank you for writing this funny, cute story.

Love the last line!

I love how Kaylee's the one in trouble instead of Simon.

Mal, some Big Damn Hero he is. Give him a good gun fight and he's there. Pit him against one itty bitty girl and watch how he runs. LOL!

I'm loving this story, Mal/River is not exactly my cup of tea, but you make it sound very much possible! Are you going to continue? Please update!

love this story! can't wait for the next update!

Aw, this is adorable...and cute...and Jayne is dumb! I love it!

Love this story. Can't wait to watch Mal fall.

great story , keep up the good work

I love her last time to Mal...
"with the contact..Just see what's happens...
Yup the wheels are spinning and son she will pounce...genius! Can Mal Pounce on first? I would love for River to be caught by surprise..

Great story...can't wait for more..