This is intensely moving. Extremely depressing...but so lovely.

Wow. What intensity this story has. The sex scene is great, taking everything slowly and keeping their emotions in mind. The fact that you wrote something so great without dialogue, is truly the work of a master of ones craft if that makes any sense. Anyway, thank you for posting something so absolutely perfect.

i love how this is written so in-depth awesome work.

that was heartbreaking and gorgeous.

eheh i was too lazy to sign in.
m, pr0n.. that was excellent, I actually love the angst. And the end.. *pets Hakkai*. He does not deserve this. And I love how he makes Gojyo stay xD it's kind of cute if a little sad.

This was really well done~! Massive brownie points to you, m'dear, and stop saying that you fail, because this rocked. <3