loved it

CLIFFE

NOW WHAT")

POOR SARAH

whT NXT

well whose was the voice i wonder

cliffe

so far so good

Nice ending. Keep smiling. :-)

Thanks for sharing this reading. Keep smiling. :-)

I'm glad the story continues and off the read more!

wow, I really like this! I like what you've done with the story, especially the stakes (it was basically what I was going for too, but I had no idea how to put it)and your OC. you updated fast too, I'm impressed :). can't wait for the next bit

Thanks for sharing this interesting reading. Keep smiling. :-)

yay im glad ur going to finish the story .cant wait to read the next chapter =]