I would really like to see Donia kick Asta's ass in a fight.
"who does she think she is?" oh, I don't know. May I suggest, the winter court's kickass QUEEN?

Okay. This chapter has officially killed me. Let me just write down my reactions:

"Hey, pretty." Me: ASDFLJHLK KEENAN YOU PRECIOUS BEING!
The engagement; Me: Hold up for a sec. Are you SERIOUS? NO, goddammit!
Keenan's lovely presents for Donia and her reaction; Me: I love you. I love you both. Let me hug you.

Some day, I'll end up in a hospital with a heart attack caused by your story. But I'll be very glad about it.

Sorry! That new review was actually mine! :)

You have no idea how much I freaked out with excitement when I saw that you updated this story! And oh, all the emotional trauma you caused me.. I squealed with joy when they met again, I had tears in my eyes when they fought, and at one point I actually screamed "Just KISS her, you idiot!" Don't mention the end.. when they said they were just best friends, I just scoffed: "Yeeeaahh, right.." Ah, you leave me with so much anticipation! I just want them to get back together.. so badly! I really can't wait for the next chapter!

I applaud you. This chapter was a sweet torture to me, but it was so good!

Love it

I. Love. This!

My favorite chapter!

Omg are donia and keenan going to meet up? please continue!

aw :) I needed some Keenan/Donia today lol

What you got to say?"

Sorry hun but I don't think keenan is black.

This is very good but in order to write a successful fanfiction you should really watch your spelling.

Ha! Take that Keenan ;) Aquil's so adorable D

Hey good going! You've really nailed Donia (and Keenan and Aislinn but Don is definitely the hardest) I'm happy this last chapter was a little cheerier. I loved how Aislinn and Donia start off sniping at each other and being all formal and by the end of the night they're best friends kidding around. One thing you should do is proofread a bit more carefully, especially that last chapter with Keenan. Oh and I really like your OCs. They're really rounded out and not at all clich'ed. Its funny that Keenan is now the mopey one who can't think of anyone else and Donia is the one chasing the new love interest. Winter KING anyone? Hmmm? Hah! Serves him right. Go mope Keenan! Go mope in California! I still want them back together though. I mean Aquil's cool and so is Aislinn but Donia and Keenan are MEANT TO BE no matter what the stupid staff says. Happy writing! -Rainchecker

This chapter was really fun, D Donia is becoming Donia at last!

aww, i actually feel sorry for Keenan, ( Update soon I can't wait to see what he does D

Aww, so I guess they're not getting together...to bad. Awesome writing (haven't heard the song before but as soon as I'm done reviewing I'm off to .) Update as soon as you can (unless your finished...? Who cares, I'll say it anyway, Review! review! Review!) D