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| Reviews for Adventures In Falling |
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   turtlelover0511 6/20/10 . chapter 5So, this story is really cool, and I know you haven't been on here in a while m but PLEASE CONTINUE! |
| Scrumpy 11/12/09 . chapter 5 great story make more chapters |
| Iris Musicia 11/3/09 . chapter 1 Nice story! It's just a couple of grammar errors that are bugging me. Check the capitalization on Total's name, and you might want to do a new line for when Max talks to the Voice and Angel. Overall, great narrative! |
| CartedOff 11/3/09 . chapter 4 the weekend is just too far away! |
| nooooooo11111 11/1/09 . chapter 3 update. UPDATE! |
| Weightless 8/5/09 . chapter 3 The story is really good so far. Yeah, definitely add some Fax. It will make the story even better |
| Little Miss Understood 7/28/09 . chapter 3 You should totally put some Fax in the story! |
| ivyflightislistening 7/28/09 . chapter 3 I liked the first three chapters! Especially the part about Max's peace of mind shattering on the ground, and her next to it. That was a really great metaphor-thingie-whatever the heck they're called. Update soon? |
| FalselyTrue 7/8/09 . chapter 2 Luna: Well-written, interesting...is there a plot? Rose: Put spaces between the paragraphs... Luna: And...Ooh! We're the first reviewers! Rose: Neato! Luna: I think it's a good start. |
