|Reviews for Adventures In Falling|
| turtlelover0511 6/20/10 . chapter 5
So, this story is really cool, and I know you haven't been on here in a while m but PLEASE CONTINUE!
| Scrumpy 11/12/09 . chapter 5
great story make more chapters
| Iris Musicia 11/3/09 . chapter 1
Nice story! It's just a couple of grammar errors that are bugging me. Check the capitalization on Total's name, and you might want to do a new line for when Max talks to the Voice and Angel. Overall, great narrative!
| CartedOff 11/3/09 . chapter 4
the weekend is just too far away!
| nooooooo11111 11/1/09 . chapter 3
| Weightless 8/5/09 . chapter 3
The story is really good so far. Yeah, definitely add some Fax. It will make the story even better
| Little Miss Understood 7/28/09 . chapter 3
You should totally put some Fax in the story!
| ivyflightislistening 7/28/09 . chapter 3
I liked the first three chapters! Especially the part about Max's peace of mind shattering on the ground, and her next to it. That was a really great metaphor-thingie-whatever the heck they're called. Update soon?
| FalselyTrue 7/8/09 . chapter 2
Luna: Well-written, interesting...is there a plot?
Rose: Put spaces between the paragraphs...
Luna: And...Ooh! We're the first reviewers!
Luna: I think it's a good start.