Aw, I like your story -- but I understand. Update when you can. =)

Ughh! I was just getting into the story and had the rug pulled out from under me. It sounds like a unique take on Twilight. From the sounds of it, none of the main characters are vampires? None-the-less I love it so far. Just know that you have a fan in me and I look forward to reading whatever you write. Not to give you a big head or anything but I think you are a very talented writer, and if you have not published any of your stories, you should really think about it. When you get a chance, you should really update this story, it has good bones!

Please continue, I am enjoying it.

Plz keep goin wit it its beyonf amazing!

I am glad that you will eventually post and I am glad that when you do it will have your utmost attention.

lol Thanks for letting us know. I love the chapter title!

Great chapter.

Really hope you continue with this :)

loved it!!:)

I think you should keep up with it. :) I am liking it so far!

Interesting chapter. I like the fact that Alice is a brain... but think that Edward is a bit crazy. Great job.

Great start to this story. I really like it. Can't wait to find out more about the residents of Forks.

:D I had a History teacher named Mr. Morrison...*lives in parallel universe* :O Great story, by the way.

Rena the Strange

Yes, it took me forever to get to reading this. Yes, I should be flogged with a wet noodle.

And YES you should continue it. I'm loving every word.

Wow, this is cool!

It's got a lovely flow to it and the dialouge is excellent and I love, love, love how prominent Jasper is in the story so far. Great work!