aw... so cute!^^ i can't wait till you update again!^^

oh this is so sad and sorry about the last review and thanks for clearing it up :)
They're baby selves are so cute and Naru's gone emo at the end. wah!
Oh I wonder if you're going to do the scene when he first sees her again, that would be so cool. plz pretty plz

you have a good plot going but there are too many spelling errors that take away from your fic. other than that it sounds very interesting! just be careful with the spelling.

Like this story looking forward to the next chapter.

Aww this is really sweet =D I can't wait to read more!

Well, this looks interesting... Those three looks really cute together! xD

awws. this was cute update again soon =]
but you might wanna read it over. in a lot of places you have "sense" instead of "since" those are 2 different words ..

hi i so think that it is so cute...poor naru aka oliver aka noll aka kazuya. hope they meet again though...can't wait for ch.4...

Aww... kawaii~~! Too bad it didnt last... (Pout)

Wanna see more

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ZOMG! This was so cute! Love it! Completely! :D

i so so so love it i was so glad u updated and i love all the chapters but mostly the 3 chapter is the best so far. u should contenu writing what happend when all three were together like the past again as they get older then go to the age when mai lost her memory(poor mai)well cant wait to the next update and please make the chapter way longer i just lke to read this more well ill be happy as long as u update soon.

-mel-

ps:ur add to my favorits.auther and story fav.

please tell me you'll update again soon? (ChibiEyes)

huh, thanks for the flashback it was helpful! can't waitfor the next chapter!
Zacheria

wow i love your story so far and you made the 2 chapter interesting really good i hope u update soon.

OH wow! Awesome! Okay..This chapter is better. I loved your cute idea!