Damn! Why do I always fall in love with the stories that are abandoned halfway through? Come on , I know its been three years, but update!

What I find so amazingly readable about this story is just how much of it is dialog. Dialog that doesn't suck, or tries to be overly hip/tragic, or goes on, and on, forever. You've struck the right balance here between romantic fluff (adorable and sweet), and the expected narrative.

You even managed to elegantly side-step much written-about drama relating to character pasts and love triangles. Something that usually makes a story and that I expect to be reasonably covered in any good Twilight fic. Still, I'm pretty satisfied with the light and airy feel of things here.

I do hope that you decide to write more someday.

awesome start! please update soon!

this is great! keep it up.. dont forget authors notes

okay. my mother is lesbian. and i dont get this. my mother was with my father while with women. well woman. but now they r divorced. lol. but i honestly think bella should stay with edward. and alice should be with jasper. it fits better. no offense. i know wlaice and bella loves eachother. but i cant see them loving eachother like that. like i said no offense. i just cant!

is alice bi? is bella bi? cuz i know that is not a certain sign of friendship...

so jake's ok with it?

i think this will be interesting, i actually think b/a would make a good couple. but i have to ask, what about jasper and edward?

l like it lots.

Faved it, this story is awesome.

Good job !

Please hurry up with next chapter.

I really enjoyed what you have written so far.

Please update soon!

-Falcon

awesome story, hope you write more soon. D

interesting, can't wait for more,

bella so sneaky, lol

ciao

I love the way you've seamlessly integrated this with the actual story and your portrayal of Rosalie is brilliant! I am really looking forward to the family scene :)