So...If he ever gets thrown into a tree, it'll break and hurt ALOT. XD UPdate.

thank god for no cliff hangers yet!!

I'm glad I can help you with my reviews. Sorry it took me so long, I'm getting old. :D And don't worry, scholl is having me again, too.

Now I understand why Omega sounded so strange in chapter fourteen, he's actually the age of Geo! What confuses me is why he acts so much like a battle-hardened warrior - despite everything that happened to him, he sounds way older than he is (then, Blues for example always acted so mature although he was a teenager in mind, he was just programmed this way). On the other hand, I think I understand where you're going with them being almost the same age. You put them close together in mind-set like Rockman and Netto were to give them a different, more brotherly dynamic. Omega otherwise would have never hugged Geo so early, and still he is close to his game's persona.

It seems as if the Wave Wars has affected the people enough to make them wary/paranoid of anything from the Wave World not acting like they think it should. This only adds to my suspicion I voiced for the chapter about the Wave Wars and what maybe lies for Geo in the future. *shudder*

Aw crap. That stinks. Tom won't remember though. That's a good thing.

That came as a surprise when I read it the first time, not just for Geo and Omega. Their reactions were hilarious. I wonder if there's more to this than what Aaron revealed in chapter 23.

That's the reason Geo fears he will be put in mental facility should people learn of his ability. Ugh, the matter is that in the reality, people also tend to generalize one negative event to each following one which ressembles it just the slightest. But what struck me is that it says "so tell the history books", even more so because Geo doubts the details about it. Who was this scientist who supposedly pitted the fractions against each other? Why isn't his name mentioned anywhere? There's something fishy about this subject. It probably isn't coincidence the chapter mentions wave-warfare, fighting sides and weapons technology in the same lines as Geo, his ability and that they could put him in a hospital (laboratory rather, as Omega implies) if they find out about him. - Speculations, I know, but the way the chapter tells it, information about the War seems to have been manipulated. And I have a (bad) feeling, repeating myself, that the government wouldn't want Geo for "curing" him - more likely use him in said Wave experiments.

My favourite part was where Omega complimented Geo and even admitted he did so. Heh, seems like he has already taken a big liking to Geo. *snickers at the tough guy attitude*
Out of curiousity (err, okay, what else x'D): Is it of importance that Omega does not only smell the food, but also likes it? As a being that isn't from Earth and can't touch anything there, this is strange (but also funny as heck).

YOu know, Benjamin Franklin said something about secrets once? " A secret of three is only safe when two are dead."...Hopefully noone will have to die. UPDATE!

*snickers* Though guy, indeed, Omega. *snickers more at the mental image of Omega falling asleep in the middle of conversation* And the FM warriors were silly to the boot, just like in the series. Gosh, once wonders how they manage to do anything with them fighting all the time.

I really begin to wonder what Omega did to make himself a traitor. Strange is that the FM-King doesn't seem to want him killed - yet. But I have a feeling he won't take it so well hearing that a human (and Omega's merge partner, on top of that) can see him without any visual aid. I dread especially what Cygnus will do if/when he learns the identity of Geo...

Oh. So THAT'S why. Huh. The human race hasn't changed much has it? Update soon.

Aha. Poor Geo. XP Update.

OMG! This is a good story! And their personalities are switched! That's acutally really cool. Oh and um...Omega-Xis's friends are dead aren't they. It's the only thing I can think of other than the fact they may have betrayed him, but they didn't seem like the type by mention of personality. Update soon! I have good expectations from the story!

I love the grade of details, it sets up the situation as well as the environment and the background. Rather than in a separate chapter, you should have put it together with the first one because they feel like that they belong together. The real shift is at the beginning of chapter three as they're out of school now, then separate before Geo goes to AMAKEN.

Aw! Mega needs a hug. I liked this chapter it showed a complete other side of Omega-Xis. Keep it up the good work! :D

*laughs* Hey, hey, not so fast, you leave me no time for reviewing the last chapters.

This dream sequence was weird. I can't help but think of the persons as humans instead of Wave beings: Twelve years old, birthdays, how the room looks like where Omega wakes up to. These all just don't seem to fit as they hardly resemble humans in their Wave form and probably don't need chairs and such.
It is also strange that Omega was conscious it wasn't him acting and talking in the dream but his younger self. Besides, I wonder if this gunshot was truly only Geo's books dropping to the floor - the problem is though, from where should Omega know the sound of gunshots?

It's hard to say much about Omega's feelings. He is more playful as well as outgoing, in the present melancholic about it. His thoughts at the end are repetetive (though it is overdone as he says in every sentence "forget"), showing that his thoughts are circling around these memories and he can't let go. There's a part which is very confusing, though: "How could I ever not forget that day?" The readers know what you mean, but the sentence doesn't make sense with the "not".

The flow of the sentences reads jumbled at some places, which I also noticed in the previous chapters. It isn't like big rocks on a road which breaks the story's axle, more like bumps which interrupt the readers on the move. This comes from that you mostly use commata and points; I've only seen a handful of semi-colons, double points and others in the whole of all chapters! I don't say to throw with them around you, but it will help to structure to your sentences better.

The other things which caught my eye were the redunancies at some places: "...that was balled into a fist. Inside her fist...", or like above with "forget". There are one or two spelling mistakes, but only minor.

I hope this proved again to be helpful and I didn't go overboard with it.

I was truly anticipating Geo and Omega's Wave Merge and it didn't disappoint. I laughed reading about how unbelieving Taurus was, as it had been already a coincidence he found in Bud his wave equivalent and then couldn't believe Omega to do the same. The only thing I didn't like is that the text doesn't say word about the merge itself. With the amount of detail in the story, I'd actually expected at least one or two sentences about how Omega reached out to Geo or how he sent his waves into him; then, this is only my personal opinion.

My favourite of the chapter was the interaction between Omega and Geo. The way he can't but feel touched by Geo, though he doesn't know why, and Geo showing his concern although he barely knows Omega, that truly rings something in you. Still you're not jumping to outright trust - they come into a situation where Omega needs to work together with Geo and gets to know him better through his actions.

The action scene had a good flow, the events clearly separated from each other and still connected. The sentences' length were a bit too long for an action scene, the pacing contradicting that of a fight and the tempo of Taurus's movements. On the other hand, he was still baffled by the unexpected Wave Merge of our pair, while they had catched up to his speed. There's also the amount of details bothering me - I feel like more would have been better here to make the scene more plastique. Does this contradict my comment on the sentence length?

Okay, I hope this will help you, even my opinion about the action scene.