Reviews for As The Tide Comes In

Reviews for: As The Tide Comes In
thechickenlittle 7/18/07 . chapter 1 poor vinnie.
silverphyrbyrd 12/30/06 . chapter 1 Um. Not sure. One thing, though - sort out your tenses, these flips from past to present and back again are confusing.
Rainesama 11/20/02 . chapter 1 Wow. I started reading this fic and then "Vinnie starts looking to the tide" and I started freaking out. I was like "Oh crap". But then you ended it so abruptly and I was like "Whoa! What the hell just happened?". LOL, I love it! I call that good writing skills. You had the reader thinking they were in for a long one, then you ended it so quickly you're like, "Whoa". Kudos.
Sunset 8/20/02 . chapter 1 Great story! Please write some more about Vinnie. He's my favorite. -Nami Ernst or just call me Sunset
Sunset 8/20/02 . chapter 1 Great story! Please write some more about Vinnie. He's my favorite. -Nami Ernst or just call me Sunset
Invidia Psyanide 12/30/01 . chapter 1 Again, good. Like these. keep 'em comin' (CKD) Keep it up!
Dark Ghost Fox 12/29/01 . chapter 1 is this gonna be a serie?