HEhehhehehe fun! hmmm songs...um I'm only good at Shippy stuff. I can find really good songs that I like to use in shippy but usualy not anything else but here are some sugestions...

um I've used this song before in one of my fics but oh well it has really good lyrics. Bones and joints by "finger eleven" perhaps.

but another one i really think might work is a Colin Hays song. Its got a bit of romance in it nut it is really good. And I think it kind of fits with the UC team! um its called "Waiting for my real life to begin". you can find the lyrics for the song at... enter/going_ #Waiting there!

Oooo I like! Hmmm that whole "father figure thing" I am pretty sure Jake (or at least John S.) is older than Donovan(oded). Oded JUST turned 31 at the end of November! lol oh well he does look older. *in a yummy sexy hot swoon worthy way* *drool* lol sorry hmmm on to Alex...

I loved this!

Please do one for each of them. You captured that inner tomoil really well.

I think this was excellent! Yes, write one for them all! I'm really curious to see what you come up with for Frank. :) :) :) :) :) Deana

Yes, I like this very well, please write one for each of the characters. I am looking forward to seeing your story about Donovan, he is my favorite.

YES! I like the story; it got better as I got into it. The song is quite appropriate for the Jake we know and you definitely should do a story on each member of the team.

I just hate to offer criticism, but since you're learning. . . . I noticed a typo or so and in the first paragraph, you changed tenses.

Please consider this constructive criticism. You're doing just great with your writing and I'll wait not so patiently for more! LOL