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melaniefolk
2009-08-06 . chapter 13
"Oh, poor you, your hat is dusty."
xD
and "Haha, he said gay!"



you are epic.
melaniefolk
2009-08-06 . chapter 27
"In fact, I KNOW Demeter would want to kick you no matter what happened. She hates you. Go figure."

I LOVE POUNCE. :D
you wrote this perfectly.
erikaonbroadway
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
Wow! I read the whole thing and totally love it! Pouncival is one of my favorite characters, he's just so cute and bouncy! And the way you made it from his POV is so cute and funny. My favorite line is in Skimbleshanks when he's like 'I'm not suprised if that was a fake sneeze, just like Etcetera can cry on command, and I can look incredibly sexy, which is all the time!' I laughed so hard. Haha, anyways I LOVE it!
ElectricDemeter
2009-07-25 . chapter 30
Fantastic! This is an awesome story! I'm glad I found a really good Pounce-point-of-view fanfic!
Tiherina
2009-07-25 . chapter 30
This was such a cute story! I'm sad that it's over, but it was awesome. Pouncival is one of my favorite characters, and I loved reading a story where he's the main character. ^^
SummerRose12
2009-07-24 . chapter 30
Awe! I really liked that ending. Pounce was more adorable than ever, which is enjoyable. Every word was entoxicating. Great work! I really enjoyed it all.
SummerRose12
2009-07-22 . chapter 29
Wonderful! Just simply and perfectly beautiful. This had all of the adorable opinions and thoughts of Pouncival that just simply touched and amused me. Great work. I can't wait to see you're next installment.
Malurina
2009-07-22 . chapter 29
This is such an amazing story, I love it
Skittakallista
2009-07-21 . chapter 24
I LOVE this fanfic! (I was meaning to review earlier but I kept forgetting...) As a teen myself I can definatly relate to pounces mind thats definatly how we think! 'I have a random mind. pineapple.' You have no idea how much that made me laugh!
SummerRose12
2009-07-20 . chapter 24
Haha! I enjoyed this chapter so much. I was wondering how you would explain this song, and I have to say, it was beyond amusing!

During the train wreck, I thought it was adorable how it was Pounce who started it. It was hilarious!

And I was expecting that you would give a big Sudden blow-out suspense when Macavity's crash enters, but it was hilarious still. Actually it's understandable knowing he came like what? Three times! They got to be used to at some point!

Can't wait for Macavity: The Mystery Cat! Can't wait for your next installment!
SummerRose12
2009-07-18 . chapter 19
Haha! Hilarious and detailed and wonderful. I love it! Great work. Sorry I have been really busy and haven't had the chance to review, but I got to this chapter! Yay!
SummerRose12
2009-07-17 . chapter 18
All of this was very detailed and accurate to the movie, and it really did impress me. Sorry I'm making this so short, but it was really good! Great work!
SensesFaillxx
2009-07-14 . chapter 14
i love this story so far! i like how you made it Pouncival's POV cuz he doesnt really get noticed too much in the play...its something different & i like it. my favs are Rum Tum Tugger and Mungojerrie & Rumpleteazer so far. i cant wait till you continue(=
SummerRose12
2009-07-10 . chapter 14
Ah, these chapters never cease to amuse me. Mungojerrie and Rumpelteazer have always been two of my favorites, and you serve them justice with this chapter! No spelling errors that I saw, (Yay!) and I just thought characterizations were accurate and VERY fun. All-in-all, WONDERFUL CHAPTER~
ElectricDemeter
2009-07-10 . chapter 13
Really awesome! Keep writing, post more! I am anticipating Mungojerrie and Rumpleteazer.
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