Wow this was pretty funny I loved it! Great job ^^

I completely love this story, it made me laugh!
The ending could have been longer and more detailed, but I really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing! :)

I laughed my ass off. Poor jigsaw. He just wanted to see you play his game. All well. It was pretty funny.

LOL poor Jiggy!
I really enjoyed it, I'm still grinning just because of the imagination!
The only problem I had was with the ending. You know, the first room took about the whole page and the second room including the "grand finale" took about two lines, that's a little short ^_^# No offence, I really like your FF, but it would be even cooler with one last LOL at the end or something like that.

... that was weird