  SheWhoMustNotBeNamed 11/9/11 . chapter 6 I gave up reading this FF at this point, even though there are 10 more chapters. Not meaning to be nasty, but you need to improve it and make it more interesting.
You-Know-Her |
 luminare91 11/4/11 . chapter 16This is sooo good! I really hope you plan on eventually continuing it. |
| chat noire 5/15/11 . chapter 8 And now Lily's a muggleborn again? Honestly your fic's interesting but you have got to get your facts straight. And Remus and Hermione? Seriously? That's just sooo wrong on sooo many levels, 1) he used to be her teacher 2) Hermione understands better than anyone that you can't mess with time, yet by dating Remus that's exactly what she's doing |
| chat noire 5/15/11 . chapter 7 Okay there are a few mistakes in this chapter. . . 1) Lily's mum going to Hogwarts, which would make her a witch, with would make Petunia a witch
2) Lily wouldn't have been a muggle, she is however a muggleborn, but with you making her mum a witch Lily would therefore become a halfblood. |
| BookWorm230 4/6/11 . chapter 16 hurry up with chapter 17 please |
| Allyieh 5/18/10 . chapter 16 Merlin, I wish you finished this fic! It's so good! |
| Ikidori 8/31/09 . chapter 16 amazing fic! |
| Hocapontas 8/25/09 . chapter 16 I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! When they go back will anything have changed? Did they change anything in the past? And I love that Sirius (adult) is in this story. |
| Leah 6/7/09 . chapter 8 First she was a muggle-born then a half-blood then a muggle-born.
WTF?
Someone clearly has ADD with Lily Evans. |
| Leah 6/7/09 . chapter 7 LILY WAS A MUGGLEBORN! Says so in book one! Heck why am I still reading this crap! |
| Leah 6/7/09 . chapter 5 Over-done cliched Hermione! Who I'm sorry to inform you is not so gorgeous men would be talking about her. She's only average maybe slightly less. |
| Leah 6/7/09 . chapter 4 Kay it's getting harder to read this story with every scene with Lily being
'I wish I could slap her.' |
| Leah 6/7/09 . chapter 3 Lily seems like a bitch. She was suppose to be well liked yet if I was at Hogwarts I'd hate her.
Remus was the Prefect not James.
You're being rather harsh on Peter aren't you? If they trusted him enough to be the secret keeper then he wasn't a moron they disliked.
Just some stuff I've noticed so far.
-Leah |
| blklover 5/1/09 . chapter 16 great story keep up the good work update soon |
| TruthOfTheMatter 1/19/09 . chapter 2 um, i'm sorry to point this out but 1981 was the year the potters died. |
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