amazing fic!

I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! When they go back will anything have changed? Did they change anything in the past? And I love that Sirius (adult) is in this story.

First she was a muggle-born then a half-blood then a muggle-born.

WTF?
Someone clearly has ADD with Lily Evans.

LILY WAS A MUGGLEBORN! Says so in book one! Heck why am I still reading this crap!

Over-done cliched Hermione! Who I'm sorry to inform you is not so gorgeous men would be talking about her. She's only average maybe slightly less.

Kay it's getting harder to read this story with every scene with Lily being

'I wish I could slap her.'

Lily seems like a **. She was suppose to be well liked yet if I was at Hogwarts I'd hate her.
Remus was the Prefect not James.
You're being rather harsh on Peter aren't you? If they trusted him enough to be the secret keeper then he wasn't a moron they disliked.

Just some stuff I've noticed so far.
-Leah

great story keep up the good work update soon

um, i'm sorry to point this out but 1981 was the year the potters died.

nice.

aw. so sad :(

this is cool ^.^

Hey :]. This story is very good, but I noticed a mistake. Arabella Figg is a squib... meaning that she couldn't have gone to Hogwarts. Someone might have already pointed this out, and if they did, sorry... I haven't read further.

love it!

I really like this fic but I judt wanted to point something out. Petunia (I'm almost positive about this) is younger than Lily. Also you said that Lily's mum and James' mum went to Hogwarts together but Lily is muggleborm. It is good but just had to pick those out.